假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
A best friend is someone to 1. you can tell everything, even your most 2. (person) feelings and thoughts. Anne Frank treated her diary 3. her best friend. The German Nazis were in search of Anne and her family. The family had to 4. away from the chase. They didn’t dare to go out even in the evenings. They had to stay indoors day and night. Not 5. (be) able to go out for such a long time, Anne missed the beauty of nature so much that she grew 6. about everything to do with it. She stayed up 7. eleven thirty one evening on 8. just to see the moonlight. She said, “This is the first time I 9. (see) the moonlight since I came here.”
10. (fortunate), the family were discovered at last and taken away from the hiding place.
Making friends is a shill. Like most skills, it ______ patience. If you want to meet people and make friends, you must be willing to ______ some action. You must first go where there are people. You won’t make friends staying home ______.
Joining a club or group, talking to those who like the same things ______ you do is much easier. Or join someone ______ some activity.
Many people are ______ when talking to new people.______ all, meeting strangers means seeing the unknown. And it’s human nature to feel a bit ______ about the unknown. Most of fears about ______ new people come from doubts about ______. We imagine other people are ______ us—finding us too tall or too short, too this or too that. But don’t forget that they must be feeling the same way. Try to accept yourself ______ you are, and try to put the other at ease. You’ll both feel more comfortable.
Try to act self-confident even ______ you don’t feel that way when you ______ a room full of strangers. Walk tall and straight, look at other people directly and ______.
If you see someone you’d like to ______, say something. Don’t wait for ______ person to start a talk.
Just meeting someone ______ does not mean that you’ll make friends with that person.______ is based on mutual (相互的) likings and “give and take”. It takes time to ______ friendship.
1.A. costs B. needs C. spends D. wants
2.A. take B. make C. do D. carry
3.A. lonely B. yourself C. alone D. with you
4.A. At as B. that C. which D. what
5.A. with B. in C. on D. to
6.A. shy B. excited C. afraid D. worried
7.A. At B. For C. In D. After
8.A. A unhappy B. usual C. upset D. unlucky
9.A. meeting B. talking C. visiting D. speaking
10.A. yourself B. himself C. yourselves D. ourselves
11.A. talking B. saying C. judging D. laughing
12.A. like B. as C. what D. that
13.A. when B. if C. as D. what
14.A. come B. go C. enter D. step to
15.A. laugh B. smile C. cry D. jump
16.A. speak to B. talk about C. say to D. call up
17.A. other B. the other C. another D. others
18.A. old B. young C. new D. little
19.A. Relation B. Friendship C. Connection D. Feeling
20.A. develop B. start C. keep D. change
Five Ways to Improve Communication Skills
Communication is one of the most important skills we can ever learn. It affects everything that we do —whether we’re communicating at work to meet deadlines and achieve results, or communicating with friends, family and partners to build strong relationships. Thus communication is very important. Here are five ways to improve your communication skills.
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This reflects a real lack of respect. By interrupting someone, what you’re basically saying is “I don’t care what you’re saying—what I have to say is more important”.
Don’t finish other people’s sentences.
2. Wrong. Research has shown by doing this you are dis-empowering (剥夺权利) the other person because you are taking control of the conversation, so bite your tongue!
Paraphrase.
If you want to show that you have really understood someone, then paraphrasing (解释) is a great tool.3. Here’s an example: “So Barney, what I’m hearing is that results are the number one objective for you right now and we need to find some fast solutions for you?”
4.
Focus on active listening instead of passive listening. The difference is that active listening means you engage with and respond to the other person based on what he/she has said, while passive listening is simply the act of listening with no response.
Maintain eye contact.
By looking at the other person in the eyes, you are proving that you’re interested in what he/she is saving.5.
A. All you do is repeat back to someone what he/she has just said, before you comment yourself.
B. You don’t see them interrupting others or leaving off mid conversation.
C. Listen actively.
D. This also keeps you focused (集中) and less distracted (分散).
E. Talk actively.
F. I used to do this a lot thinking I was helpfully finishing people’s sentences for them.
G. Never interrupt people.
My family recently did our first major road trip, traveling from our Maryland home to Disney World in Florida. Though we’re no strangers to travel, a trip of this length was a new experience for us with three children. What helped us enjoy our trip so much? Our schedule, of course! So keeping a schedule when you travel can help make your trip a success.
Don’t sleep the day away.
I know you’re on vacation. The kids have a break from school, and you’re excited to be out of the office. Let everyone sleep for a bit, but Still make it a point to rise at a reasonable hour and get active to start the day. Not only will you see and do more on your trip, but it will make it easier to eat regularly, get the kids down at nap time (午觉), and then go to bed without a struggle.
Eat regularly.
Time is easy to go by while you’re running through a theme park, or exploring (考察) a museum. Be prepared for meals because hungry kids are often quick to turn into a headache for you. Pack a snack and drink bag and make sure to stop regularly for a bite to eat while you’re out. Keeping a regular meal schedule can help everyone keep up their energy and enjoy the day.
Take a nap.
Does your baby take a daily nap? Naps are very important for baby’s development. They also help little ones to pick up their strength, or vacations can be exhausting (疲惫的) for little minds and bodies.
Go to bed at a reasonable hour.
Everyone can get tired out on vacation. Don’t allow anyone to stay up late every night. Mom, dad, and kids are all sure to be miserable if they don’t get enough sleep. If bedtime gets delayed (推迟), adjust your travel plans accordingly.
1.Why does the author write this passage?
A. To tell the readers what fun it is to travel.
B. To introduce some attractions of Disney World.
C. To introduce one of his travel experiences to the readers.
D. To give some advice on keeping a schedule while traveling.
2.From the passage, we can infer that .
A. the writer is a stranger traveling in the U.S.
B. the writer is familiar with travel and has much experience
C. a proper schedule helped the writer enjoy his trip to Maryland
D. eating a little more helps little children to recover their strength
3.What kind of people is the passage mainly written for?
A. Travelers to the U.S.
B. Travel companies or agencies.
C. Teenagers crazy about traveling.
D. Parents who plan a family travel.
4.During the trip, the author will agree that .
A. taking a nap during the day is necessary for the children
B. games and enjoyable activities can last until late at night
C. brunch is a good choice if you sleep late in the morning
D. the bedtime should be changed if the travel plan changes
Some people learn a second language easily. Other people have trouble learning a new language. How can you help yourself learn a new language, such as English? There are several ways to make learning English a little easier and more interesting.
The first step is to feel positive about learning English. If you believe that you can learn, you will learn. Be patient. You do not have to understand everything all at once. It is natural to make mistakes when you learn something new. We can learn from our mistakes. In other words, do not worry about taking risks.
The second step is to practice your English. For example, write in a journal, or diary, every day. You will get used to writing in English, and you will feel comfortable expressing your ideas in English. After several weeks, you will see that your writing is improving. In addition, you must speak English every day. You can practice with your classmates outside class. You will all make mistakes, but gradually you will become comfortable communicating in English.
The third step is to keep a record of your language learning. You can write this in your journal. After each class, think about what you did. Did you answer a question correctly? Did you understand something the teacher explained? Perhaps the lesson was difficult, but you tried to understand it. Write these accomplishments in your journal.
You must be positive about, learning English and believe that you can do it. It is important to practice every day and make a record of your achievements. You will enjoy learning English, and you will have more confidence in yourself.
1.When you learn English, you don’t need to .
A. be patient
B. make mistakes
C. express your ideas in English
D. understand everything all at once
2.Which is NOT helpful for you to enjoy learning English?
A. To communicate in English.
B. To worry about making mistakes.
C. To think about what has been done after classes.
D. To make a record of your achievements.
3.What is the main idea of this passage?
A. It is very important to learn a second language.
B. Some people learn a second language easily while other people do not.
C. There are ways to help you learn a second language more easily.
D. Don’t worry about making mistakes when learning a second language.
