Question

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Allen下个月要参加全美高中生汉语演讲比赛，来信询问你如何写一篇精彩的汉语演讲稿。请根据下列要点给Allen写一封信。

1.愿意提供帮助；

2.给出具体建议；

3.祝他取得佳绩。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Allen,

I’m very happy to know that you are going to take part in the American National Chinese Speech Contest.And it's my honor to give you some advice on how to write a good speech in Chinese.

First,a good beginning is quite necessary.Because you can catch the audiences' attention and interest if you begin your speech in a lovely and interesting way.For example,you can begin your speech with a Chinese proverb or a famous quotation.That way,the audiences will think you have a good knowledge of the Chinese culture.

Second,make your speech as convincing as possible.To do this,you had better give some vivid examples or your personal experiences,which can say much more than comments.

Last,do some proofreading after you finish your text to avoid as many mistakes as you can.

Good luck to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是1.愿意提供帮助；2.给出具体建议；3.祝他取得佳绩。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
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本文是一篇书信，格式正确，采用三段式，内容齐全，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I’m very happy to know that you are going to take part in the American National Chinese Speech Contest.句中使用宾语从句；it's my honor to give you some advice on how to write a good speech in Chinese.疑问词＋动词不定式做介词的宾语；you can catch the audiences' attention and interest if you begin your speech in a lovely and interesting way．ｉｆ引导条件状语从句；To do this,you had better give some vivid examples or your personal experiences,which can say much more than comments.动词不定式做目的状语，ｗｈｉｃｈ引导非限制性定语从句。