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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

John Snow—a doctor,who attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician.But he was willing to help ordinary people exposed in cholera.Many people died every time there was a outbreak.He wanted to face the  challenge and solve the problem.No theories caught her attention.The first suggested that cholera multiplied in the air.The second suggested that people absorbed this disease into their bodies and the disease attacked the body.John Snow believed the second was right but he needed evidences.When another outbreak hit London in 1854,he was ready to begin his enquiry and tried to get more information.He found that most of the deaths was near a water pump and the spread of the disease was with water.With the information,he was able to conclude that polluting water carried the virus.After that,he suggested the source of all the water supplies was examined.Finally "King Cholera" defeated.

 

1.删除who 2.exposed in---to 3.a---an outbreak 4.her---his attention 5.evidences---evidence 6.the deaths was---were 7.with---by water 8.polluting---polluted 9.was---be examined 10.加was defeated 【解析】这篇文章主要讲了约翰斯诺打败霍乱王的故事。 考查句子结构。这个句子是一个简单的主谓宾结构,没有含有一个定语从句,所以删除who。 考查固定短语。expose to暴露于,是固定用法,所以exposed in---to。 考查冠词。Outbreak的首字母发音是元音,所以a---an outbreak。 考查代词。约翰斯诺是男士,所以her---his attention。 考查名词。evidence是不可数名词,所以evidences---evidence。 考查主谓一致。他发现大多数的死者都靠近水泵并且这种疾病是通过水传播的。“most of the deaths”是复数意义,所以the deaths was---were。 考查介词。他发现大多数的死者都靠近水泵并且这种疾病是通过水传播的。表示“通过……的方式”,用介词by,所以with---by water 。 考查非谓语动词。Pollute与water之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词作定语,polluting---polluted。 考查虚拟语气。the source of all the water supplies be examined.是一个省略了that的宾语从句,suggest表示建议,所以这个宾语从句需要使用should+动词原形,should可以被省略的虚拟语气,was---be examined。 考查语态。“霍乱王”和“打败”之间是被动关系,所以用被动语态,defeated之前加was。 名师点睛:这道题目中,最难的就是小题9,考查了虚拟语气在宾语从句中的用法。虚拟语气在宾语从句中的用法是一个常见的考点,现作如下归纳: 一、 动词 wish, suggest, order, insist, propose等后面的宾语从句中常使用虚拟语气,此时宾语从句中的动词表示的是一种愿望和要求。 1. wish后的宾语从句中的虚拟语气。 wish 后面宾语从句中的虚拟语气,要按“后退一步法”处理从句中谓语动词的时态。注意:表示何时的愿望,与哪个事实相反,不能以主句的时态为判断依据,而应根据从句的意义判断。 例如: I wish I could fly. 我希望我能飞。 (用一般过去时表示与现在事实相反的愿望) I wish I had known it before. 我希望以前就对此事有所了解。 (用过去完成时表示过去未实现的愿望,即与过去事实相反的愿望) I wish you would stay a little longer. 我真希望你能多呆一会。 (用would+动词原形表示对将来的愿望) 2. 表示“要求、建议、命令”等动词后面的宾语从句中的虚拟语气。 这类动词包括:demand, suggest, order, insist, propose等。这些动词后面的从句中用 “should + 动词原形”构成虚拟语气, 其中 “should” 可以省略。例如: He insisted that all of us (should) be there on time by any means. 他坚持要我们大家想尽办法按时到那儿。 The teacher suggested that we (should) clean the blackboard after class. 老师建议我们课后把黑板擦了。 He ordered that the students (should) wash the clothes every week by themselves. 他要求学生们每周都要自己洗衣服。 注意:当insist表示“坚持认为”、suggest表示“表明,暗示”时,其后的从句中不用虚拟语气。例如: The look on his face suggested that he was quite satisfied with what I had done for him. 他的表情暗示出他对我为他所做的事非常满意。 He insisted that he was honest. 他坚持认为自己是诚实的。 二、 短语would rather后面的宾语从句中常用虚拟语气。在这种结构中,从句中的谓语动词通常用一般过去时形式表示虚拟。例如: I'd rather you didn't make any comment on the issue for the time being. 我倒希望你暂时先不要就此事发表意见。 Wouldn't you rather your child went to bed early? 为什么你不愿让你的孩子早点上床睡觉呢?  
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