Question

如今很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式—共享单车（bike-sharing),它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示：

Advantage	便捷，污染少，减缓交通压力,锻炼身体……
Problems	被扔进河里，被损毁，被偷走……
Advice	遵守规则，保护……

注意：

1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；

3. 词数：80—100 (文章开头已给出，不记入总词数)。

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.

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Answer

Bike-sharing

Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It’s known that it has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people.

First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpful to people’s health.

However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.

In my opinion, everyone should follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式作文，以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍共享单车的优点和缺点，以及自己的看法和建议。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

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