Question

假定你是学生会主席李华，邀请交换生peter参加你校在本月举行的文明校园（civilized campus）创建活动。请根据以下要点，给他写一封电子邮件。

1.活动目的；

2.活动内容(倡导语言美、行为美、环境美）；

3.表示欢迎。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

Dear Peter，

It is great honor for me to invite you to take part in the activity"Build a Civilized Campus"this month．（高分句型一）

We aim at going hand in hand to set up our civilized campus where beauty and harmony meet．（高分句型二）To achieve the goal，we'll call on the school to communicate with each other in polite words．Meanwhile，we should behave ourselves and obey school rules．As a nice environment is good for us，we'll space no effort to create a pleasant school environment．（高分句型三）All the above is to contribute to the good conduct of teachers and students in our school．

It would be nice if you could join us．

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】 本文是写一篇给定主题的书面表达，写作话题是邀请交换生参加校园文明活动。在写作时应注意要符合主题，通篇以一般将来时为主；要点要齐全，并且使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅；行文思路要有逻辑性，条例清晰。因为所有的考生的大致内容都是一样的，所以难点就是写出让人眼前一亮的作文。学生可以采用简单句与复杂句结合的方法，并且同时尽量避免多次使用相同的单词与词组，使内容更加的充实。

【范文亮点】文章开篇点题，采用“It is great honor for me to do something”意思是我很荣幸做某事，take part in 意思是参加，高级句式和短语，吸引阅卷老师，

同时文中还是用“ set up 意思是建立，communicate with each other 意思是相互交流，”等高分短语，还是用“Meanwhile”同时做连词，使文章更紧密。