假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When Molly’s father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8, hand him a bag. The father was in hurry so he didn’t know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small stone. The busy father smiled, finished eating, and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly’s junk. This evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it. I love you, Daddy. The father went to his office hurried, carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell her about the junk. It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk and treasures!
Getting fit no longer 1. (require) a pencil-and-paper workout plan or a food diary. If you’re looking for some new and 2. (create) ways to improve your health, try Fit Time.
It’s like your personal trainer. After 3. (get) all the information it needs-your height, weight, age, and exercise habits-it gives you a customized training course, 4. asks you to work out four times a week for about two 5. (month). The exercises focus 6. a different part of your body every day. For instance, on Monday, you do push-ups (俯卧撑) to build up your arms, and on Tuesday, you build up 7. (strong) in your legs by doing deep knee bends. 8. exercise plan changes as time goes by.
The best part of this app is that everyone can share 9. (they) workout results and follow their training. It is a great way for you and your friends 10. (encourage) each other to build strong bodies.
It was no wonder I was not looking forward to entering the ninth grade. High school is well known for being a battleground, where everyone seems to be ______ through physical changes and emotional mood swings (情绪波动). For me,______ was my punishment.
I had always ______ insecure and out of place as one of the ______ members of my class, standing a head above the other girls and standing at the ______ of the line to avoid sticking ______.
I especially hate being around large groups of ______, like during the social hour after services at my church.______ the prayers were finished, I would ______ as quickly as possible so I could ______ some well - meaning congratulations, “Ruthie! Look how tall you’re getting!”
My grandfather would watch me ______ increasingly uncomfortable, but he did not ______ at my self-consciousness (自我意识) or try to comfort me, ______, he would remind me. “Stand ______ and tail,” he would say, as I ______ tried to shrink (缩) myself. Even at age 15, I understood that his advice was about ______ than just feet and inches.
My grandfather ______ in war-torn Europe. When German soldiers ______ his hometown, he joined the army to ______ his country’s freedom. “Stand straight, stand tall,” ______ something else back then.
1.A. getting B. putting C. looking D. going
2.A. age B. weight C. height D. face
3.A. become B. gone C. placed D. felt
4.A. fattest B. tallest C. thinnest D. shortest
5.A. head B. end C. front D. side
6.A. to B. off C. up D. out
7.A. people B. girls C. teachers D. students
8.A. Until B. Unless C. Once D. While
9.A. leave B. come C. stop D. walk
10.A. accept B. receive C. avoid D. refuse
11.A. make B. move C. turn D. become
12.A. look B. stare C. smile D. laugh
13.A. Instead B. Besides C. However D. Therefore
14.A. back B. straight C. up D. by
15.A. satisfactorily B. happily C. unsuccessfully D. unwillingly
16.A. other B. more C. less D. rather
17.A. grew up B. worked C. died D. travelled
18.A. helped B. developed C. occupied D. visited
19.A. look after B. fight for C. work with D. stay with
20.A. meant B. advised C. carried D. included
How Not to Be Awkward
Not at all us are outgoing and ready to take the world by storm.1. This usually happens when a person is still in his or her teen years and going through the socialization process. So, what can a person do to overcome this tendency to be awkward? Let’s try to find answers to the questions.
Stay in shape and dress up well
Sometimes, awkwardness could be due to being overweight. When you are large in size, you tend to get very self-conscious. So, in order to avoid this, get into the habit of exercising every day.2. If you look as if you have just stepped out of a 1980’s film when actually it is 2011, there is no doubt that you are bound to feel awkward about yourself?
Be optimistic
Another effective tip on how riot to feel awkward is to always keep a smile on your face.3. On the other hand, a smiling, happy and positive thinking person is appreciated by everybody. So, smile when you meet acquaintances or even strangers, say a cheerful “Hi!” and automatically some of your awkwardness will disappear completely!
Participate in team activities
This one really helps. Awkwardness generally develops when a person remains isolated from others. So, in order to change this situation, join groups.4. Joining people in book reading sessions as well as debates will help remove your awkwardness. Choose any activity of your choice, such as playing team sports or joining a dance class, and soon you will find your comfort level around people increasing day by day!
Develop your personality
Being a book-worm or an Internet addict will not get you anywhere. For self-improvement, take up a hobby that adds meaning to your life. Learn singing or try adventure sports.5.
A. Learn how to end a conversation.
B. Secondly, have appropriate clothes on.
C For instance, if you are a reading lover, join a book club,
D. If you look sad, nobody will actually like being with you.
E. Something as simple as listening to music will do wonders too.
F. Many among us are shy and may even feel kept apart from others.
G. Awkwardness could be because you do not have anything in common to talk about.
Is going on holiday of any benefit? New research shows that going on holiday makes you not only feel good while you’re there but also gain the health benefits for months.
Jetting off to destinations such as the Maldives cuts your blood pressure, helps you sleep better and bounce back from stress. The benefits last at least a fortnight longer than the vacation and can be felt for months in some cases where it is claimed. Experts say workers should always take their holiday entitlement (权利) each year, but as ‘many as one in three don’t.
The study compared key health markers in holidaymakers visiting Thailand, Peru or the Maldives, with those in people who stayed at home and continued working. The average blood pressure of those on holiday dropped by six percent while the workers saw their blood pressure rise by two percent over the same period. The sleep quality of holidaymakers improved by 17 percent while that of the non—holidaymakers deteriorated by 14 percent.
The study also found the ability of vacationers to recover from stress, known as the stress-resilience test, improved by 29 percent. There was a 71 percent fall in stress-resilience scores among workers. Tests showed fallen blood glucose (葡萄糖) levels, reduced risk of diabetes (糖尿病), trimmer waistlines and improved mood and energy levels, with the effects sustained for at least two weeks after returning home.
The Holiday Health Experiment was conducted by tour operator Kuoni and Nuffield Health, the UK’s largest healthcare charity.
1.According to the passage, how many people go on holiday?
A. One third. B. Two thirds.
C. 17 percent. D. A quarter.
2.Which of the following can we infer from the passage?
A. The further you go, the better you get the benefits.
B. Most people like to stay at home during the holiday.
C. The result of the study is mostly based on the description from the people involved.
D. Holidaymakers are more likely to be healthier than non-holidaymakers.
3.The author intends to tell us that .
A. we have to go on holiday as much as possible
B. you’ll certainly get depressed if you don’t go on holiday
C. we had better go on holiday for the benefits of our health
D. it is best to go to foreign countries like Maldives
4.The best title of the passage is .
A. A Holiday Health Experiment
B. Health Benefits from Holiday
C. Health Problems of Having Holiday
D. Key Health Markers m Holidaymakers
Black Friday is the Friday following Thanksgiving Day in the United States. It has been regarded as the beginning of the holiday shopping season. Although it’s not an official holiday, millions of employers give their employees the day off, and many people use that day to get a jump-start on their holiday shopping. A similar day in Canada and Great Britain is called “Boxing Day”.
Black Friday has become somewhat of a marketing sensation in recent years. Since 2005, it has been the busiest shopping day of the year. To lure shoppers, retailers (零售商) routinely open their doors as early as 4 a. m. and offer special sales and promotions to the shoppers that arrive early. Some of the special deals offered by stores are only available in limited quantities. That is why some shoppers intent on getting the best deals often camp out in front of stores overnight so that they’ll be the first in line when the doors open.
But why Black Friday? Historians believe the name started in Philadelphia in the mid-1960s. Bus drivers and police used “Black Friday” to describe the heavy traffic that would block city streets the day after Thanksgiving as shoppers headed to the stores.
Businesses, however, didn’t like the negative tone associated with the “Black Friday” name. In the early 1980s, a more positive explanation of the name began to circulate. According to this alternative explanation, Black Friday is the day when retailers finally begin to turn a profit for the year. In accounting terms (会计行业), operating at a loss is called being “in the red” because accountants traditionally used red ink to show negative amounts. Positive amounts were usually shown in black ink. Thus, being “in the black” is a good thing because it means stores are operating at a profit.
Recently, for those who are too busy to shop on Black Friday or who just don’t want to fight the crowds, the Monday following Black Friday has become known as Cyber Monday (网络星期一) for the many online deals.
1.On Black Friday，the Americans .
A. don’t have to go to work as usual
B. look exactly like the Canadians
C. are usually busy doing shopping
D. stay at home and relax themselves
2.The underlined word “lure” (in Paragraph 2) probably means .
A. protect B. attract
C. persuade D. remind
3.How do the retailers understand Black Friday?
A. It is totally different from Boxing Day.
B. They usually lose some money on the day.
C. It never keeps them very busy.
D. It probably brings them more money.
4.The author writes this passage in order to .
A. state the development of Cyber Monday
B. tell the difference between red and black
C. introduce Black Friday to the readers
D. explain the meaning of Boxing Day
