Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My aunt was a smoker for long time.I couldn't stand smell the cigarettes in her breath I loved her very much,but I hate being around her.That I did was telling my parents about my feelings.They understood me,but told me that they would say anything to her about it.My parent told her I loved her so much that I was worried about her health. My aunt gradually kicked her addiction of smoking by chewing gum,and eventual quit altogether!It made everyone much more happier when we were together.

Answer

1.for后加a

2.smell→smelling

3.hate→hated

4.That→What

5.but→and

6.anything→something

7.parent→parents

8.of→to

9.eventual→eventually

10.去掉more

【解析】1.for a long time很久，很长时间，固定搭配，做句子的时间状语。故加上a.

2.stand doing忍受做某事，是固定搭配。故把smell改为smelling.

3.根据句子时态可知该句也应该用一般现在时，hate形式不对，应该用过去式hated。故把hate改为hated.

4.That I did在句中是主语从句，句中缺少did的宾语，应该用what 做从句中的宾语，引导这一从句。故把That改为What.

5.根据句意可判断此处表示“他们很理解我，并且告诉我他们会跟姑姑说的”，因此前后分句是并列关系。故把but改为and.

6. anything表示任何事，本句表示“他们会跟姑姑谈这件事”，应该用something about it。故把anything改为something.

7.根据上句提到my parents，因此此句同样表示“父母亲”，应该用parents.故把parent改为parents.

8.表示“对…的瘾”应该用addiction to sth.，故把of改为to.

9.此处应该用副词修饰动词quit，eventual的副词形式为eventually.故把eventual改为eventually.

10.happy的比较级为happier，more多余。故把more去掉。