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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Johnson is a friend of mine.I’m glad he changed greatly in the past two years.I clearly remember he was quite fat two years before.He got tired so easy that he couldn't take exercise,mat made him very upset.Later,he realized unless he went on like that,he would end up achieve nothing.So he made up his minds to make a change.He went running every morning and played the basketball every afternoon.Besides,he followed a diet of more vegetables or less meat.Gradually he began to lose weight.He is now an energetic boy in good health.so when faced with problems, we should overcome it with great determination and strong willpower.

 

【解析】本文属于故事类。约翰是我的一个朋友,他两年前很胖,不做运动,这让他很沮丧。他意识到这样的话会什么也做不成。于是他积极锻炼身体,减肥成功,成为一个健康精力充沛的孩子。这件事告诉我们要有决心和坚强的意志力克服困难。 1.添加has。 考查现在完成时。in the past two years,在过去 的2年里,要用现在完成时。 句意:我非常高兴在过去的2年里他变化很大。因此要用现在完成时,主语是he,即has changed. 2.before改为ago. 考查时间状语。两年前要用two years ago,因此要把before 改为ago. 句意:我清楚地记得他两年前相当的胖。 3.easy 改为easily 考查副词。句意:他很容易感觉累,以至于不能进行锻炼。Easy修饰got tired ,作状语修饰动词,要用副词形式,故要用easily。 4.that 改为which. 考查非限制性定语从句的引导词。He got tired so easy that he couldn't take exercise , that made him very upset.本句含有一个非限制性定语从句。他很容易累以至于他不能进行锻炼,这件事让他非常沮丧。在非性定语从句中只有which ,可指代前面的句子,修饰整个句子,而that 不能引导非限制性定语从句,故要把that改为which. 5.unless 改为if。 考查连词。句意:后来,他意识到如果他继续这样下去,他将什么也做不成。根据句意可知如果这样的话,如果if ,而unless 除非(=if not)。因此,要把unless 改为if. 6.achieve 改为achieving. 考查固定搭配。end up doing最终会做某事,end up后不能用动词原形,要用doing形式。句意:如果他继续胖下去的话,最终什么也不能做。 【名师点睛】end up with和end up doing 区别 end up doing sth,最终会做某事,强调(以作某事而告终或结束),必须使用动名词作宾语。而end up with,最终成为,以...结束,突出最终会得到的结果,后面接名词、代词或从句作介词with的宾语。 1).If he continues like this,he will__a stone only to have it drop on his own foot,just as the saying goes. 如果他继续如此的话,那就会正如俗语所言,他将最终是搬起石头砸自己的脚。 2). Consumers end up bearing this extra cost. 消费者最终承担这笔额外成本。 3). You could end up running this company if you play your cards right. 你要是处理得当, 到头来这个公司能归你掌管. 4). Wasteful people usually end up in debt. 挥霍浪费者最后往往负债。 5) If you do that, you'll end up with egg on your face. 你要是做那件事必将以耻辱告终 6). If you continue to steal you'll end up in prison. 你要是继续行窃终归得进监狱. 7). If he carries on driving like that, he'll end up dead. 他照这样开车, 早晚得死於非命. 7.minds 改为mind. 考查固定搭配。在 make up one’s mind(下定决心)中,如果 one’s 是单数,mind只能用单数,如果 one’s 是复数,则 mind 用单数或复数均可。而本句的主语是he ,故只能用单数。因此.minds 改为mind. 8.去掉the。 考查冠词的使用。play basketball为固定搭配,不加冠,是专指打篮球,而play the basketball打那只篮球,在本句中的意思不符合。故要去掉the. 【名师点睛】play basketball中有无词冠的区别。 英语中好多情况是不能用冠词的。不用冠词的情况如 1、专有名词前通常不用冠词,如China, America, Englishd 2、复数名词表示一类人或事物时:Men are cleverer than monkeys. 人比猴子聪明。 3、 表示季节、月份、星期的名词前一般不用冠词。如:He was born on Monday, February 18, 1995. 他出生在1995年2月18日,星期一。 In spring 在春天 但如被一个限制性定语修饰,表一段特定时间时,要在其前加the如:in the spring of 2006 4、 节日、假日前一般不用the。 如:on Children’s Day Teachers’ Day 教师节 5、 球类名词前不用the,如:play football play basketball 但如果球类前被形容词修饰,则可在形容词前加冠词,如play a/the shabby bastketball. 因此,play bastketball.是固定搭配,打篮球。而play a shabby bastketball是打一只/那只破旧的篮球。 9.or 改为and。 考查连词。句意:他每天早上跑步,下午打篮球。此外,他多吃蔬菜和少吃肉。从句意可知跑步,打球,吃蔬菜和少吃肉是并列关系,都是他要做的事,不是或者要做,因此要把or改为and. 10.it 改为them. 考查代词。从句意可知it 指代前面的problems,问题的复数,故要用them,因此要把it 改为them.  
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