Question

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。请根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：

1.建议他可以来中国；

2.阐述你的理由（就业机会多、专业受欢迎、不同的文化体验等）;

3.承诺可提供帮助。

注意：1.词数：100〜120；

2.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week. I have been thinking about the question you asked me. From my point of view, you can choose to come to China after finishing your studies.

For one reason, China’s development over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young. What’s more, what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays. In fact, many big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you.

For another reason, China is a country with so different cultures and traditions from the west that many foreigners enjoy living and working here. Why not come and join them? I’m sure you will adapt to the environment quickly. If you come here, I will do what I can to help you. So what are you waiting for?

I’m looking forward to your coming.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇电子邮件。你的英国笔友Mike即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否到中国工作询问你的意见。根据以下提示回一封电子邮件：1.建议他可以来中国；2.阐述你的理由（就业机会多、专业受欢迎、不同的文化体验等）;3.承诺可提供帮助。根据所给提纲，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇电子邮件，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。I have been thinking about the question you asked me.句中使用现在完成和定语从句；what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays.what引导定语从句；Why not come and join them?运用why not do sth.固定句式；If you come here, I will do what I can to help you.if条件句和what宾语从句；另外，For one reason, What’s more, In fact, For another reason,等的运用为文章增色添彩。