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A good student will always make a proper study plan, with which he can study more effective.
There was once a time I listened to the teacher carefully in class and always did my homework on time. Every day I was as busy as a bee. I had no free time. Therefore, I had a few after-school activities. However, I couldn’t understand that I didn’t get good marks. So I asked my headteacher Mr. Li with help. He advised me to have a proper study pan make. I took her advice. After I stick to the plan for a month, I made rapid progresses. What made me even happy was that I had much more time to develop my own interests.
Bike sharing is growing in popularity as a means of public transportation. It seems like a perfect solution1.China’s heavy traffic. 2.some local authorities(权威人士)say the bikes have become a nuisance and one Shanghai district has confiscated(没收)almost 5,000 bikes. The unregulated parking has caused continuous problems and 3.(complain). Traffic police had confiscated the bikes because they had been 4.(legal)parked.
Shanghai is the world’s largest bikeshare city with 280,000 shared bikes citywide. That number is expected5.(jump)to 500,000 by this June, according to Guo Jianrong, Secretary General of Shanghai Bicycle Association.
Until the turn of the century, bikes were the main form of transport in Chinese cities. But in recent years, as Chinese have grown6.(rich)than before, bicycles7.(replace)by private cars, motorbikes and other public transport.
Bike sharing is hardly new, but what makes8. unique in China is that its usually station free---which means that users can leave the bikes anywhere they want. It’s also cheap. Shanghai is not the only city 9.bike sharing has had teething(萌芽的)problems. More than 500 bikes10. (rent)out by bike sharing firms were piled up in the southern city of Shenzhen in January.
It had been a tiring journey. I _______the hotel at about ten o’clock that night. There were many other tourists waiting to ______in. I approached the reception desk and_______my room number and the ______ to it. To my disappointment, I found that there had been a_______in communication and my reservation(预定)for a room had not been ______. The receptionist(接待员)was very polite and helpful. She told me that the hotel was fully_______for the night and suggested that I live in another hotel which is further down the hill. Faced with hardly any choice, I ______her suggestion.
The hotel was rather strange and warm. The owner was Percy Williams who doubled up________a receptionist and a waiter. He greeted me________and showed me my room. By then I was so tired that I jumped into bed and
______a deep sleep.
The next morning, I woke up feeling very much ______. I realized that I was______with a blanket and my clothes were______put in the closet. “Mr. Williams is indeed a nice man,” I thought to myself. I decided that I would_______on in this hotel for the rest of my holidays.
I met Mr. Williams on my way out and thanked him for his_______. Mr. Williams was surprised. “I didn’t do anything _______show you to your room last night, Miss ______must be my wife who did that.”
“Please give my thanks to your wife then,” I said as I moved to leave. Mr. Williams’ next few words made me _______ .
“I’m afraid I can’t, Miss. You see, my wife has been dead for ______.”
1.A. reached B. left C. arrived D. approached
2.A. live B. check C. take D. get
3.A. looked for B. took away C. asked for D. picked up
4.A. answer B. way C. access D. key
5.A. limit B. mistake C. fame D. story
6.A. observed B. governed C. received D. accepted
7.A. booked B. lent C. fixed D. rented
8.A. took over B. took down C. took on D. took up
9.A. as B. between C. for D. among
10.A. friendly B. calmly C. warmly D. formally
11.A. lay down B. longed for C. dreamed of D. fell into
12.A. frightened B. optimistic C. delighted D. energetic
13.A. spread B. covered C. filled D. operated
14.A. smoothly B. neatly C. carelessly D. urgently
15.A. drive B. ride C. stay D. travel
16.A. comfort B. smile C. favor D. generosity
17.A. except B. besides C. beyond D. beneath
18.A. She B. That C. This D. It
19.A. laugh B. hesitate C. freeze D. wonder
20.A. moments B. years C. centuries D. hours
With modern technology, much written communication tends to focus on the keyboard, but handwriting is still a necessary and important skill.1.Here are some tips for you to improve your handwriting.
Examine Your Handwriting
2. Look through your writing to decide what makes it difficult to read or what makes it unattractive. Perhaps you write your letters too small. Check on spacing of letters and words, and proper formation of letters. If your letters are small, put more effort into writing larger letters. If certain letters trip you up, practice those letters separately and within words.
Write Correctly
Positioning and technique play a role in how your handwriting looks. Hold the pen between your thumb and first two fingers so that it rests against your fingers. Hold it firmly enough to control the tip but not so hard that it hurts your fingers. Lighter pressure on the paper helps you create smooth lines and focus on your letter formation.3.
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Letters are formed from several basic strokes(笔划). Practice those strokes separately to get your hand used to forming them. Strokes found in letters include vertical lines, horizontal lines, and circles. Build on those to practice specific letters.
Write for a Purpose
Teach young children handwriting in meaningful contexts. Use that same idea by picking up a pen to write lists and notes by hand instead of typing. Keep a journal daily with slow, correct strokes. 5.These true and sincere writing opportunities make the practice meaningful.
A. Build on Basics.
B. Practice makes perfect
C. Focus on improving your correctness instead of speed
D. Writing at a slower speed also helps you focus on letter formation
E. Put a handwritten letter in the mail to surprise a friend or a relative
F. Handwriting requires your brain, eyes and hands to work together to form letters.
G. Before you can improve your handwriting, you need to know where you’re falling apart.
A total of 34 Chinese cities with a combined population of nearly 300 million took park in a pet adoption day at the weekend, promoting the adoption of rescued stray (流浪的)animals.
The live broadcast of China Pet Adoption Day events in Shanghai, Beijing, Chengdu, Guangzhou, Hangzhou, Nanjin, Qingdao, Tianjin and Xi’an was watched by 562,000 people.
From Urumqi in the far northwest to Fuzhou on the southeast coast, people gathered to raise awareness of animal care and to help stray find loving homes.
Sun Quanhui, manager and senior adviser of World Animal Protection, said, “Planet Earth is not only home to humanity but also a home that we share with other animals. It is mankind’s duty and important to treat animals kindly in a civilized society.”
As China’s population becomes richer, pet ownership has increased rapidly, but problems, such as pet abandonment and cruelty, are also growing.
In recent years, more and more adoption events have taken place all over the country, which indicates an awakening of the Chinese public consciousness to animal protection.
“Adopting a pet instead of buying one has been gaining a wider acceptance.”
American Edward Dumpe, who has been working on designs for stray animal shelters in Beijing, said, “It surely sounds super sweet and I have no doubt that it must have been the result of great efforts.”
“I think it is a good step in the right direction, and should be taken as evidence that Chinese society is becoming more aware of stray animals who should be taken care of and treated with respect.”
In real life, “Rabbit-eating Carrot” is fashion designer who has created clothes embroidered(刺绣)with slogans(口号)such has “Please adopt a pet” and images of her cats, with all earnings going to the Qiming Small Animal Protection Center in Sichuan Province.
“I didn’t know that there were events like this in China. This is fantastic. Impressive.” Said George Philippe, a french living in Beijing and father of two, at an event in the capital.
1.What is the aim of live broadcast of China Pet Adoption Day event?
A. To improve the awareness of animal adoption
B. To attract more attention to the Event
C. To encourage more and more people to take part in the live broadcast.
D. To introduce some useful western practice of animal adoption
2.What will be a problem with the increase of pet ownership?
A. More pets are in great need in China
B. There is not enough related service for pets and their owners
C. Some pets need to be given large space to enjoy themselves
D. Some people throw their old or disabled pets away
3.From the story of “Rabbit-eating Carrot”, which word can be used to describe her?
A. Smart and cute
B. Creative and independent
C. Fashionable and kind-hearted
D. Wealthy and healthy
4.What is the best title for the passage?
A. The animal right in China
B. No trading, no killing
C. How to treat your pets with hearts
D. Live broadcast promotes animal adoptions
Mariah, 35, was a single mother. She had four kids under the age 9, and was hardly keeping up payments on her small two-bedroom home by working extra weekend hours as a waitress. There were times when she lay in bed and cried. She didn’t know how she could pay that bill. But she knew she must find a way to change her life.
She knew how hard it was to mop(拖)the floor. “I was tired of bending down, putting my hands in dirty water and wringing (拧)out a mop,” Mariah says. “So, I got a better way.” How about a “self-wringing” mop? She designed a special tool. You could twist in two directions and still keep your hands clean and dry.
She set out to sell her mops, but the mops didn’t sell well at the market. Then Mariah met with the media. But would people buy a mop by reading an advertisement? They gave it a try, and it failed. Mariah was sure it would sell well if they let her do the on-camera show. “Get me on that stage, and I will sell this mop because it’s a great thing,” said Mariah. So QVC let her have a try. “I got on the stage and the phones went crazy. We sold every mop in minutes.”
Today Mariah is the president of Ingenious designs, a multimillion-dollar company, and one of the stars of HSN, the Home Shopping Network. Talking about hr household inventions is as natural for her it is for parents to talk about their child.
Today one of her favorite products is Huggable Hangers(衣架). The thin, space-saving tool are the most successful goods ever sold on HSN, with 100 million hanging out in closets across the country.
1.According to Paragraph 1, Mariah _______.
A. had no way to take care of her children
B. lived a hard life but she didn’t give up
C. was depressed for she couldn’t pay the bill
D. did a part-time job every day to support her family
2.What was the secret of Mariah’s success?
A. She worked hard enough
B. She sold the mops herself
C. She had a lot of friends
D. She knew the needs of the market
3.From the passage we know that HSN__________.
A. is a famous TV station
B. is run by Mariah
C. sells some home-use goods
D. makes people show goods on the stages
4.It can be inferred from the passage that _______.
A. Mariah loves her career very much
B. Huggable Hangers is Mariah’s best invention
C. one cannot succeed without the help of others
D. Mariah is very popular in her country
