Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 he was sent there.At that time she was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted worker. They took good care of him and he lived a happily life. Two years ago, he was admitted to an university. Upon heard the news, all the people in the village feel very glad. ＂He is an intelligent but hard-working boy. He set a good example for the children here, and we are all proud for him,＂ one worker said. Wang Lin loves the village and the people there, so he is often returns to see them whenever he is free.

Answer

Wang Lin is a child who has grown up in the SOS Children’s Village. It was in 1992 he was sent there.At that time was only four years old. Fortunately, he met many kind and warm-hearted . They took good care of him and he lived a life. Two years ago, he was admitted to university. Upon the news, all the people in the village very glad. ＂He is an intelligent hard-working boy. He set a good example for the children here, and we are all proud him,＂ one worker said. Wang Lin loves the village and the people there, so he often returns to see them whenever he is free.

【解析】

第一处：he前面加that 此处是强调句型，强调的是时间状语in 1992，故需要加that构成强调句型的基本框架。

第二处：she → he 从全文看，Wang Lin是个男孩子，应该用he指代。

第三处：worker → workers 前面修饰语是many，而且下文用They指代，故此处用名词复数形式。

第四处：happily → happy 修饰名词应该用形容词，故把happily改为happy。

第五处：an → a university是以辅音音素开头的单词，应该用不定冠词a。

第六处：heard → hearing 介词后面用动名词形式，upon doing sth意思是＂一……就＂。

第七处：feel → felt 从语境判断应该用一般过去时态，故把feel改为felt。

第八处：but → and 前后两个形容词是并列关系，且此处表示＂又，且＂，故把but改为and。

第九处：for → of 固定短语be proud of的意思是＂因……而骄傲/自豪＂，故把for改为of。

第十处：去掉is return是实义动词，而且此处不是进行时态，也不需要用被动形式，故去掉is。