Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句最多有两处错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.没处错误及修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第十一处起)不计分。

One day, did not feeling well, Mr, Smith went to the hospital to have him examined.When he was given the test paper, he greatly shocked.“Am I dying?” He immediately feels very sick. Filled with sadness, he went back home, taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will.“Maybe a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and went to the hospital to have other examination.To his great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful.Mr.Smith went out for his most favourite sport happily .

Answer

1.删除did

2.him 改成himself

3.feels 改成felt

4.shocked前面加was

5.taking 改成took

6.a 改成The

7.other 改成another

8.but 改成and

9.in改成 at

10.去掉most

【解析】1.去掉did，not feeling well在句中充当状语。
2. him改成himself，表示“使自己怎么样”时，应该用反身代词。
3. 去掉was，felt表示“感到”时，为不及物动词，没有被动形式。

4.句意：他感到震惊。用一般过去时态的被动语态，所以在greatly前加was。
5. taking改成took，and连接的是三个动词went、took、wrote，所以三者在形式上保持一致。
6. a—the，上文中已经提到了这位大夫，所以在此应该予以特指。
7. more—another，another“再一次”。
8. but—and，前后两句话为并列关系，不存在转折的意味。
9. in—at，本句话意思是“他根本没有得癌症”。at all“到底，根本”；in all“总共”。
10. 单词favourite本身就有“最”的意思，故去掉most。

【名师点睛】

并列谓语和分词做状语怎么区分：
1.并列谓语的特点：
几个谓语动词“对等词形”,且有“连词”；还会有“承前省略：后面的动词可以省去与前面重复的情态动词,助动词或be动词,或省去不定式符号to 等”.如所给第二个句子：
He “will listen to” my heart,“hold” my wrist to feel my pulse,“and”“ take” my temperature..
2.分词做状语：
整体结构中没有谓语动词,而是用某种分词形式；表示与句子中的谓语动词同时发生或在其之前发生；或表示 与句子中的谓语动词相伴随的动作；或者表示 句子中的谓语动词动作的自然结果等.例如所给第一个句子 ：
Worse still ,I “had ”no money ,so I“ had to walk home ” ,“covering as much as five kilometers.结果状语”。

本题第5小题，taking改成took，and连接的是三个动词went、took、wrote，所以三者在形式上保持一致。