Question

In recent years，internet voting has become increasingly popular in China.People not only cast on­line votes themselves，but also urge others to vote for competitions like the“Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “Cutest Baby”．

Li Jiang，a high school student，is invited to vote in the “Best Police Officer” competition，organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers' daily work.Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories.He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds.He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “Future Singer” competition.He has already received three similar invitations this week.His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition，the family will win an overseas tour for free.Su Hua likes his cousin very much，but he finds other singers perform even better.To vote，or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

【写作内容】

1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2．用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3．不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer

【参考范文1】

On­line voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it.It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion，on­line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life.It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports.In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space.Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest，voters sometimes feel annoyed，not because they hate voting，but because they are divided between emotion and fairness.Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.Therefore，I hold a positive attitude towards on­line voting.

【参考范文2】

Internet voting is quite popular nowadays.Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting，although some are quite happy with it，and active in doing it.

In my opinion，internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society.Firstly，people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don't want to.Secondly，voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors，but rather on how many social­networking resources they have.Thirdly，the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.

In short，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted.Therefore，rules should be worked out and strictly observed.Everyone in our society should help those in need，but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.

【解析】试题分析：此类作文对考生的能力要求极高。首先考生要以30字概述短文内容。接下来就网络投票发表个人看法并提出理由和根据。文章要使用第三人称和一般现在时态为主的时态。要点：1.概述：网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网路哟投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，有时候也让人进退两难，不知道是否应该参与这样的投票。2.支持：网络投票和生活密切相关，我们应该积极参与。理由及依据：(1)它是一种社会生活的方式；网络投票方便容易，不受时间和地点的束缚，同时网络投票的反馈迅速可靠；（2）虽然网络投票有时也会给我们带来困扰，但如果有更好的参与规则，网络投票也会更加规范合理。3.反对：网络投票会给人带来负面影响：（1）人们会因为网络投票而产生被迫的感觉；（2）网络投票结果并不客观；（3）网络投票可能会被故意利用。建议考生在写作概述时，语言简练不拖沓。

【亮点说明】

就第一篇范文来说，内容紧扣主题，结构布局合理，语言精练，同时使用高级句子。It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.句中while和whether---or not的运用恰到好处；on­line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life句中since引导原因状语从句；in which candidates go around to seek supports.非限制性定语从句用在句中；voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.动名词做主语；另外，In my opinion，In addition，To be honest，Furthermore，Therefore的运用为文章增色添彩。