Question

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My hometown is a mountain village. The trees there were very green but the water is quite clean. I can even clearly see the fish to swim in the mountain streams. When the night come, the air is much cool than that in the daytime. People like to walk out their homes and have a get-together. I often run along the village happy. Unlike big cities, there the air is polluted and the buildings are high, my village is quite different. The star hang in the sky. When I look at theirs, they are so close to me. It seems as if I could touch them. The night here is so wonderful.

Answer

1. were→are

2. but→and

3. 去掉to

4. come→comes

5. cool→cooler

6. out后加of

7. happy→happily

8. there→where

9. star→stars

10. theirs→them

【解析】1. 表示一个客观的事实需要使用一般现在时，所以were改为are。

2. 句意：那里的树非常绿，并且水非常清。表示并列关系，所以but改为and。

3. see sb do sth里面的do表示整个活动或整个事件从头到尾的全过程；see sb doing sth的doing表示正在进行的活动或反复性活动。所以去掉to。

4. 在一般现在时中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词需要使用单数形式，所以come改为comes。

5. 根据than that in the daytime可知，这里用比较级，所以cool改为cooler。

6. 根据后面有宾语their homes，故要用walk out of…，意思是“从……走出来”。

7. 修饰动词 run，用副词形式，所以happy改为happily。

8. 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，先行词是big cities，关系词在从句中作地点状语，所以there改为where。

9. 天上不止一颗星星，故star要用复数。

10. 句意：当我看着它们。这里它们是指“the stars”，故theirs改为them。