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Now bike-sharing is becoming increasing popular. It is green means of transportation and provides a user-friendly experience. Besides, problems also arise. The bicycles are left almost in everywhere on the street. Also, many people ride the bicycles on the driveway, cause many traffic accidents. My suggestions on how to improve the situation were as follows.
First of all, the city government should design certain areas for parking the bicycle. In this way, fewer people will leave the bicycles like they please. Secondly, more roads for bicycles needs to be built to make sure that cyclists aren’t caught in a traffic jam.
I hope this bike-sharing project will help build better traffic or improve the air quality.
Li Daiyu and her cousin Liu Qian were on a trip to Canada to visit their cousins on the Atlantic coast. Rather than take the plane all the way, they 1.（plan）to fly to Vancouver and then take the train from west to east across Canada. The thought that they could cross the whole continent was 2.(excite).
Canada is the second biggest country in the world. People say Vancouver is Canada’s most beautiful city3.(surround)by mountains and the Pacific Ocean. On the coast north of Vancouver, it is so wet there that the trees are extremely tall.
That afternoon aboard the train, the cousins settled down in their 4.(seat). Their next stop was Calgary, 5.is famous for the Calgary Stampede. They know that cowboys come from all over the world 6.(compete)in the Stampede. Many cowboys have a gift7.riding wild horses. They also learned that most Canadians live within a few hundred kilometers of the USA border and that Canada’s population is only8.(slight)over thirty million, but now they 9.(amaze)to see such an empty country. Then they arrived in10.urban area, the busy port city of Thunder Bay at the top of the Great Lakes.
1.It is known to us that smoking is _______________(有害的)to our health.
2.They can’t enter the area without ____________(允许).
3.This is a perfectly __________(保存)15th century house.
4.Everyone has the right to be treated with ___________( 尊重).
5.The patients were ____________(观察)over a period of several months.
6.Yesterday I found a book in the bookstore ___________ ____________(碰巧)which was intended for bird lovers.
7.He _________ ___________(挑选)a beautiful dress for me last night.
8.Although she didn’t mention any names, everyone knew who she was ___________ ____________(提及).
Merril Bingham passed away in February 2016. He was a(n)______to me in many ways. He retired(退休)four years ago. Before his retirement we remained close an talked _______. Among the many things that______me that him was his devotion to family and model of fatherhood.
Merril was quite an athlete and he developed a love for_______which lasted his entire life. As I attended Merril’s funeral(葬礼), I was more impressed than ever at the______he played as a father to 8 children, who spoke at the funeral and______stories about their dad. I must _____ that, as I sat there, I wondered_____ my children would have as many great memories of their dad as Merril’s ______did of him.
One daughter remembered that the morning she was to _____, her dad was up early in the kitchen. When she came into the kitchen, he said, “Hey, you’re getting married today! Take it easy! What do you want for breakfasts?” He then made a ______breakfast and they enjoyed it together, making her _____.
A son talked about fishing trips and ______as they worked in the yard together. He _______the importance of having the open, communicative relationship that ______him to have confidence in his dad. This son also developed a love for golf and talked about loving the time when he could ______9 or 18 holes with his dad together.
The memories of the children were about time_______together, not about money, or things that______less. I need to share my faith with my children in a(n)_____ way. Being overbearing(霸道的)doesn’t work, _______being a loving example of a father does.
1.A. helper B. hero C. example D. educator
2.A. frequently B. loudly C. patiently D. continuously
3.A. attracted B. interested C. shocked D. impressed
4.A. basketball B. golf C. football D. volleyball
5.A. games B. role C. jokes D. sport
6.A. read B. made C. shared D. wrote
7.A. admit B. prove C. confirm D. imagine
8.A. how B. why C. if D. that
9.A. friends B. daughters C. sons D. kids
10.A. settle down B. move off C. graduate D. marry
11.A. big B. quick C. simple D. balanced
12.A. modest B. relaxed C. satisfied D. quiet
13.A. bargaining B. chatting C. arguing D. observing
14.A. considered B. guessed C. realized D. accepted
15.A. allowed B. forced C. persuaded D. requested
16.A. play B. dig C. cover D. find
17.A. killed B. spent C. wasted D. saved
18.A. brought B. required C. cost D. mattered
19.A. organized B. strict C. open D. easy
20.A. so B. for C. and D. but
Traveling for business or pleasure can easily damage your health. It’s easy to fail into the trap of high caloric meals and little exercise.1.
●Keep a dictionary on hand
If you are traveling somewhere with a different language, pack a dictionary and keep it close to help you negotiate(商议)the menu and make healthy food choices. 2.Look up the words that you don’t understand to help you learn about cooking methods and ingredients(材料)so that you can choose healthy food.
●3.
The more you can research before your trip, the easier it will be to keep a healthy lifestyle while traveling. To stay on track with your food, try to find a nearby grocery store or healthy food store, look up a copule of well rated restaurants that offer some healthy choices, and try to stay somewhere with a fridge or kitchen.
●Walk every day.
Exploring your destination(目的地)on foot is an amazing way to take some exercise while traveling. Walk through the nature to enjoy its beautiful scenery, listen to the sound of nature and take some wonderful pictures. 4.
●Rent a bike.
Cover more ground while burning calories by renting a bike. Many major cities have bike-sharing programs, or you could contact a local bike store to ask about bike rentals. 5.If you have an open schedule, you could even research bike tours, which are a great way to cover a long distance in a short period of time.
A. Avoid junk food and deep fried food.
B. Research the food and store some upon arrival.
C. Take a bike map of the city, research day trips and get exploring.
D. If you are exercising while traveling, make sure to take in extra water.
E. Here are some healthy travel tips which will keep you in good health.
F. You can’t avoid deep fried food if you don’t know that they’re in there!
G. This is also a great way to find hidden attractions that aren’t in the travel guides.
Don’t you just hate it when you have to take an important phone call and you’re surrounded by potential eavesdroppers(潜在偷听者)? You either have to whisper or go outside to keep the conversation private, which is not good. Now Hushme aims to fix this problem by muffling your voice and making you look like Bane in the film Batman.
Hushme is a strange high-tech mask(口罩)that blocks the sound of the wearer’s voice so that people nearby can’t hear what is being said. It connects to your phone via Blucetooth and comes with a pair of earphones. When you get a private call, all you have to do is put the mask on and it will do the rest. The pair of thick pads over your mouth does a good job of muffling your voice, but to ensure nothing gets through. Hushme also has speakers that play a variety of sounds when you speak.
The Hushme mask, which comes in a variety of colors, can be worn around the neck, like a regular pair of earphones, and attaches in front of your mouth thanks to a couple of very powerful magnets(磁铁). It’s not yet clear how comfortable speaking with this Bane-like mask over your mouth really is, or how effective its speech muffling ability is, so we know so far is that it makes you look strange. The sound choices for covering your voice currently include wind, ocean, rain, birds, monkey, but new ones could be added in the future.
Advertised as the “world’s first voice mask for mobile phones’. Hushme was showed at CES. At the becoming of this year. Its makers plan to sell it by the end of this year. It will cost about $200.
1.Why does the author mention Bane in the first paragraph?
A. To show what Hushme looks like
B. To tell eavesdropping is impolite
C. To encourage readers to buy Hushme
D. To say Hushme will be popular in the future
2.What does the underlined word “muffling” in Paragraph 1 mean?
A. Blocking B. Recognizing
C. Changing D. Remembering
3.What is certain about Hushme?
A. Its popularity B. Its appearance
C. Its high standard for comfort D. Its speech muffling ability
4.What can we know about Hushme?
A. It can be bought in the market now
B. Its price is neither too high nor too low
C. Its speakers will be improved in the future
D. Its makers are confident about its market sales
