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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I like traveling. When a holiday approach, I will careful make a plan for it. My friends like traveling either, so we always go out together. Traveling means a lot to you. First of all, every city has its own feature and lifestyle, that offers us a chance to experience diversity. By exploring these place, we can learn a lot beyond the textbook. Besides, after live in the same place and doing the same things all the way, traveling can make us refreshing. Returning back from a journey, we can be full energy again.

 

【解析】本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲述了作者对旅行的喜爱,以及旅行的意义。 1、a holiday 是第三人称单数,故后面的动词approach应加上es。 2、修饰动词make的应该是副词,故将careful(形容词)改为carefully(副词)。 3、either只能用于否定句,故将either(也)改成too。 4、全文都是使用第一人称,故将you改为us我们。 5、every city has its own feature and lifestyle要用which来替代,做句子的主语,可避免头重脚轻。 6、place为可数名词,故应使用复数形式places。 7、after为介词,故后面的动词应该用ing形式,将live改为living。 8、把refreshing改成refreshed,make sb. done表被动。 9、Return本身就有back(返回)的意思,而return back是回报的意思,故将back删去。 10、词组be full of充满。故加上介词of。 【名师点睛】 改错题中常见的错误有:1.be动词单复数。2.名词可数不可数。3.单三人称使用。(例如将approach改为approaches)4.动词的主动与被动。5.常用时态考察。6.动词过去式特殊形式。7.同义词使用条件的区别,例如本题中的either和too,either用于否定句中,too用于肯定句中。8.情态动词用法,如情态动词后直接加动词原型。9.比较级最高级使用及其特殊单词的形式。10.名词单复数(例如将place改为places)、a,an及名词复数特殊形式。  
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