Question

最近学校正在展开一场急救知识普及活动, 就此你所在的班级举行了一场讨论会,并提出以下几点建议。现请你根据以下要点以First Aid in Fires 为题写一篇文章,说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项,贴在班级的板报上。

注意事项:

1. 不要惊慌, 保持冷静；

2. 室内有浓烟时, 身体尽量低一些,用湿毛巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴逃出；

3. 不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下；

4. 你自己还有什么好的建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

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Answer

First Aid in Fires

It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire.

When you are caught in a fire, don’t panic. Firstly, you should call 119 and report it to firemen at once. If you are in thick smoke, keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose. Secondly, don’t take a lift or jump from a high building. You can fasten ropes to something that’s fixed and then slide down the building. Thirdly, don’t be unwilling to leave your money or other things behind. You should try to get away from the fire as quickly as you can. After all, life is more important. Once you get out of the fire, don’t go back into it again.

【解析】试题分析：本文考查提纲式作文写作，它给出了一个话题First Aid in Fires，说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项，贴在班级的板报上，并有部分的文字提示。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，内容齐全，布局合理，句中使用了高级词汇、短语和句子。It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire.疑问词加动词不定式作宾语，when引导时间状语从句；If you are in thick smoke, keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose.if引导条件状语从句；You can fasten ropes to something that’s fixed and then slide down the building.that引导定语从句；Once you get out of the fire, don’t go back into it again.once一旦，引导条件状语从句，运用巧妙；另外，Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, After all,的运用为文章增色添彩。