Question

请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，介绍你所崇拜的一位偶像。主要包括以下内容：

1. 偶像的身份、外貌及性格特征；

2. 你崇拜的理由；

3. 对你的积极影响。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 提示词：偶像 idol

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Answer

Of all the people I know, I admire my father most. He is short and plain-looking. His dark skin and strong body are results of hard labor. As a farmer, he is a man with many skills, making him known as “Capable man” in our neighborhood. My father is kind and helpful, so our neighbors often turn to him for help whenever they have trouble.

It is my father’s capability and personality that makes him my idol. Because to me, an idol is not someone who looks great and achieves huge success but someone whose example I can follow. My father is always inspiring me to move forward steadily and happily.

【解析】这是一篇人物类话题作文。联系题干，以此为中心内容进行选材。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.要分析题干，围绕题干进行选材，在写作思路方面，题目要求写偶像，偶像可以是存在于我们身边的人物，也可以是离我们现实生活比较远的人，不管写哪一类，都要是能对我们产生积极影响的人。2.要点要齐全，将题目要求的内容罗列完整，列明外貌、身份、对你的影响等，并注意层次结构，注意上下文的衔接。3.注意语态，描述第三人时注意动词形态的使用。

【范文亮点】

1.文章采用了“turn to sb for help 向某人寻求帮助”“As a…作为一个…”“inspire sb to do sth鼓舞某人做某事”等高频短语。

2.It is my father’s capability and personality that makes him my idol.强调句型的使用

3.My father is kind and helpful, so our neighbors often turn to him for help whenever they have trouble.引导的时间状语从句。