Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goods and free gifts. Last week, I have read an advertisement. Seeing the attract prices for the goods, I couldn't help drive to the supermarket. As the advertisement say most of the things there were much chea than usual. In not time, I filled two baskets ten bars of soap, two very nice-looking kitchen knives, and so on. When my husband got home and saw all the things, he said, "What do you need all these things to?” He was right. There was already enough soap at home, but there for    and were already two knives in the kitchen drawer. I think I should be smart about advertisement and not he tricked by them.

Answer

【解析】句意为上周,我读了一则广告。事情发生在过去，应该用一般过去时态，read的过去式为原形，而不应该用现在完成时，故删去have。

而不应该用现在完成时，句意为看到货物的诱人价格，attract 修饰prices，应该用形容词修饰名词，故将attract改为attractive。

3. 句意为我情不自禁地驾车去了超市。Can’t help doing sth ,为固定搭配，意为情不自禁地做某事，故将drive 改为driving。

4.句意为正如这则广告所说的,这件事发生在过去，所以应该用say的过去式said，故将say改为said。

5.句意为大多数东西都比平常便宜得多。由than可知应该用形容词的比较级，故将cheap改为cheaper。

6.句意为很快，我就用十块肥皂，两个非常好看的厨房刀等装满了两个篮子，等等。In no time，为固定搭配，意为立刻，马上，故将not改为no。

7.句意为我就用十块肥皂，两个非常好看的厨房刀等装满了两个篮子，等等。Fill...with...为固定搭配，意为把…装满…。故在 baskets后面加上with。

8.句意为你需要这些东西做什么。need...for...为固定搭配，意为需要，故将to改为for。

9.句意为家里已经有足够的肥皂了，而且厨房抽屉里已经有两把刀了。前后两句之间的关系是递进的，并不是转折，故将but改为and。

10.句意为我认为我应该理智的对待广告。广告不止一个，是可数名词，所以应该用名词的复数形式，故将advertisement 改为advertisements。

【名师点睛】：

And 和but的用法：

一．and 作并列连词用.
用来连接两个相同的句子成分.这两个句子成分可以是单词、短语或分句. and 连接两个分句时,分句本身都有自己的主语.如果第二个分句的主语与第一个分句的主语相同,则第二个分句中的主语可以省略.例如：
When and where were you born? 你出生在何时何地?
2. 用 and 连接两个相同的词,意在强调或表示动作多次反复.例如：
There are books and books on the shelf. 书架上除了书还是书.
3. 当 and 用来连接两个动词时, and 后面的动词在意义上表示目的.

I'll write and thank him. 我将写信感谢他.
二 .but 作为并列连词,在意义上起转折作用. but 前后的两个句子或短语在意义上形成鲜明对照. but 用来连接两个分句或两个较长的短语时, but 前面一般要加逗号.例如：
He is old but strong. 他年纪虽大却很强壮.
Learning the guitar isn't difficult, but you will have to practise.

学弹吉他并不难,但是你得练习.

以本文第7题为例：There was already enough soap at home, but there for were already two knives in the kitchen drawer. 句意为家里已经有足够的肥皂了，而且厨房抽屉里已经有两把刀了。应用and连接前后两个句子，but 作为并列连词,在意义上起转折作用.但在本句中并没有转折的意思，故将but改为and。