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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Sunday, I joined the voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school. At 8:00 a.m., we arrived there, wore red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back. We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule. To our delighted, they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-biker. We also give out some hand-made brochures about traffic regulations, for that many people praised us. About 4 hours later, they said good-bye to the police and left. Tired as we were, we all felt an honor to do our parts.

 

【解析】1. voluntary group在全文中是第一次出现,不能用特指,而应用泛指。故将the改为a。 2. 此处wear的逻辑主语是we,两者是主动关系,不是作谓语动词,故把wore改为wearing。 3. help sb. do sth./help sb. with sth.“帮助某人做某事”,不存在help with sb. sth这一搭配,故将with去掉。 4. 法规肯定不可能就一个,故将rule改为rules。 5. to our delight意为“令我们高兴的是……”,故将delighted改为delight。 6. 副词修饰动词,故将patient改为patiently。 7. 整篇文章所描述的事情发生在过去,所以动词应用过去时态,故将give改为gave。 8. 考查定语从句中介词+which的用法,此处for是与后面praised相照应的,praise sb. for sth.,that引导定语从句前面不能有介词,如果有介词,指物,要用which,故改为which。 9. 全篇的人称都是we(我们),应该是“我们和警察道别”,故将they改为we。 10. it在此处作形式宾语不可省略,真正的宾语是后面的不定式。故添加it。 【名师点睛】 一般说来,当不定式、动名词、从句等用作宾语且其后跟有宾语补足语时,就应在宾语补足语前使用形式宾语,而将真正的宾语移至句末。而能作形式宾语的只有it,其基本句型是: 动词+形式宾语+宾语补足语+真正的宾语。如: I think it is convenient to come at two. 我认为两点钟来较适合。 例如,第10题,“we all felt an honor to do our parts.”,分析句子结构可知,felt是及物动词,后面必须要有宾语,而真正的宾语为后面的不定式,故在felt后添加it作形式宾语。  
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