Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

A city, whether big and small, should be clean. Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life. As we know, a clean city, that disease may be reduced and people’s health may be better, are good both for our mind and body. No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy. However, with more and more people moved into our city, it is not easy to keep our city clean. Beside, some factories will pour waste into the air, the river and onto the ground, making it is hard to keep our city clean. To make our city the better place to live in, we still have a lot to do.

Answer

1. and —or

2. we 前加can / will

3.that —where

4. are — is

5. lived —living

6 happy —happily

7.for—with

8. Beside — Besides

9.去掉 is

10. the —a

【解析】1. and —or

考查连词。城市无论大小，都应该是干净的。Whether…or…是固定搭配。

2. we 前加can / will

考查情态动词。只有生活在干净的城市里，我们才能过上幸福的生活。

3.that —where

考查非限制性定语从句。“a clean city, that disease may be reduced and people’s health may be better…”a clean city在后面的从句中作状语。关系词不能用 that只能用where。

4. are — is

考查主谓一致。一个干净的城市，（城市里疾病可能会减少，人们的健康可能会更好，对我们的身心都是有益的。）主语是a clean city，括号里是定语从句。谓语动词必须用单数。

5. lived —living

考查非谓语。没有人相信生活在到处都是废物的肮脏城市里的人们，可以过着幸福的生活。“live in a dirty city with waste everywhere ”作people的后置定语。People和live之间是主动关系，要用v-ing形式作定语。所以lived 改成living。

6 happy —happily

考查副词。修饰动词live应该用副词。故happy 改为happily。

7.for—with

考查连词。然而因为（for）越来越多的人们迁入城市，…。With是介词，伴着，随着，后面不能跟句子。所以用连词for 换掉with。

8. Beside — Besides

考查副词。而且(besides)许多工厂把废物倒入空气里，河流里….beside在……的旁边、附近。

9.去掉 is

考查宾补。making it is hard to keep our city clean make的宾语是 it， hard是补语， to keep our city clean是真正的宾语。所以要把is去掉。

10. the —a

考查冠词。为了让我们的城市成为一个更适合居住的地方……。表数量，故要用a。