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文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 ...

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last weekend, we tried fishing on school trip. As soon as we had arrived at the pond, I made preparations for it, including fishing tool and food to attract fish. Like other classmates, leaving the pond or chatting to each other from time to time, I fix my eyes on the water. After a while, I felt anything biting the end of my line, so I started to pull them out of the water. It was heavier than I had expected, but I lost my balance, fall right into the pond! That was my first fishing experience, a happier but embarrassing experience.

 

1. on school trip.                on后加a 72. we had arrived ...            去掉had 73. ishing tool and ...           tool → tools     74. Like other classmates, ... Like → Unlike 75. I fix my eyes ...              fix → fixed 76. felt anything bite ...       anything → something 77. pull them out ...             them → it 78. but I lost ...                  but → and / so 79.fall right into ...           fall → falling 80. a happier but ...         happier → happy 【解析】school trip在文中第一次出现,是泛指概念,应用不定冠词。故在前面加a。 “As soon as we had arrived at the pond,”“我们一到达池塘边”,这里讲的是发生在过去的一个瞬时性动作,不能用完成时。故将had去掉。 tool是可数名词,钓鱼的工具肯定不止一个,所以用复数形式。故将tool改为tools。 根据“Like other classmates, leaving the pond or chatting to each other from time to time, I fix my eyes on the water.”的描述可知,我的行为与同学们的不同。故将like改为unlike。 通篇文章讲述的是发生在过去的事情,所以动词应用过去时。故将fix改为fixed。 “I felt anything biting the end of my line”“我感觉有什么东西咬了我的鱼线头”,不能用anything任何东西,与题意不符。故将anything改为something。 “so I started to pull them out of the water”,此处说的是我将鱼线拔出水面,鱼线只有一根,用代词it即可。故将them改为it。 “It was heavier than I had expected, but I lost my balance”,前后两部分是因果关系,而非转折关系。故将but改为and/or。 现在分词形式表主动含义,fall的主语是“我”,而且此处是作伴随状语。故将fall改为falling. 此处并不表示比较含义,不用比较级。故将happier改为happy。 【名师点睛】 动词常见的改错形式:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语。应仔细分析句子结构,再进行判断。 例如,第5题,“I fix my eyes on the water.”,根据全文时态可知,故事发生在过去,时态应为过去时,故将fix改为fixed。  
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