Question

随着高考的临近，部分高三住校生要求搬出学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子。针对这种现象，各方反应不一。请根据下面提示，一分为二地写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与弊端，并发表你的观点。

1．学习时间和效果；

2．安全性；

3．自由性；

4．与同学交往。

注意：1.两方面的理由至少要有两条；

2．词数：150左右。

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Answer

Nowadays，some students would not like to live in a dormitory.Instead，they rent houses outside the school.

There are advantages for both.Living in a dormitory can increase the friendship and cooperation with roommates.And，of course，it is safer.A dormitory is more like a small society，which enables students to learn to adapt to each other，and prepare for the social life later.As for renting houses to live alone，it's better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.

As a result，you can have more time to devote yourself to studying whole­heartedly.But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.

Anyhow，as a student，I prefer living in a dormitory.

【解析】试题分析：本作文是一篇阐明观点，先说家长和学生对于出租房屋有不同的看法，最后阐述自己的观点，写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写、错写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【名师点睛】

本文是一篇提纲式作文，内容齐全，符合要求，观点明确，同时使用高级句子。Living in a dormitory can increase the friendship and cooperation with roommates.动名词短语做主语；A dormitory is more like a small society，which enables students to learn to adapt to each other，which引导非限制性定语从句；it's better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.as引导原因状语从句；另外，Instead，As for，As a result，Anyhow，等的运用为文章增色添彩。