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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

About the Spring Festival, there arises some hot topics and lucky money is included. An online survey has carried out these days.

78% of the people consider lucky money one of the most important traditional custom, representing good wishes from the elderly to the new generation. Besides, lucky money is the more attractive part for kids, who forms the good memory of the childhood.

The rest, however, think bad of it. For one thing, the amount is growing bigger and bigger, make it a heavy load. For other, it has been an excuse to bribe (贿赂)people in the power.

Personally speaking, lucky money is nothing wrong. Only before understanding its meaning can we send our hearty wishes to the young.

 

【解析】第一处:考查倒装句。因为这里是完全倒装,所以主语应该是后面的topics,故arises应该改为arise。 第二处:考查被动语态。由于调查是被实行,故此处改为has been done。 第三处:考查可数名词。因为custom为可数名词,故custom改为customs。 第四处:考查副词。此句的意思是lucky money对孩子们来说是最有吸引力的一部分,而且如果是more,比较级前面也不能加the,故more应该改为most。 第五处:考查定语从句连接词。这里这句从句的意思是对童年来说是一个很好的回忆,所以这句话不是修饰children,故who改为which。 第六处:考查副词。此处修饰think,bad是形容词不能修饰think,只有副词能修饰动词,故bad改为badly。 第七处:考查非谓语动词。前面是完整的句子,所以这里的动词用非谓语,根据句意可知是主动地关系,所以用ing的形式,故make改为making。 第八处:考查代词。后面这句话的主语是it,所以这里的代词应该用一个单数代词,故other改another。 第九处:考查定冠词。这里是固定词组,意思是用权力,故in the power改为in power。 第十处:考查连词。这句话的意思是只有在理解了它的意思之后,我们才能...,所以这里是要用一个在...之后意思的单词,故before改为after。 【名师点睛】改错题常考重点: 1.注意可数名词和不可数名词,然后决定其后的动词的单复数。如文中第二处:custom是可数名词,所以在前面没有加冠词a或an的情况下,这个单词要用复数。 2.注意完全倒装时的谓语动词时态,如文中的一处,一般来看,都是there+动词单数,但是这里是完全倒装,所以要反着看,主语是topics,这是复数,所以arise要用复数。 3.注意副词和形容词修饰对象的不同,形容词可以修饰名词和修饰代词. 例如文中第六处:不能用think bad,只能用think badly。如: This is a good pen.( good 修饰名词 pen) I have something important to tell you.( important 修饰代词something.) 而副词不能修饰名词.副词是用来修饰动词,形容词,其他的副词,介词短语以及 全句的,往往是说明时间,地点,原因,程度,方式等等.例如: Don't drive too FAST though you are in a hurry.(即使你是有急事,车也不能开得太快.fast 修饰动词 drive )  
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