Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（     ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Many people like eating junk foods, because they thought they are delicious. But in fact, these foods are not healthy. That we need most is a balanced diet. Eating a balanced diet mean choosing a wide variety of foods from all the food groups. A balanced diet provides different kinds of nutrition(营养) with our body. We need a balanced diet to keep healthy. Therefore, many people still have unhealthy eating habits, that will do harm to their health. I think is necessary for us to have three meals a day properly. When eat, we should eat different kinks of foods. For an example, we should eat both meat and vegetables to get different kinds of nutrition.

All in all, it’s importantly for us to keep a balanced diet.

Answer

1. thought---think

2. That---What

3. mean---means

4. with---for

5. Therefore---However

6. that---which

7. think is---think it is / is---it

8. eat---eating

9. an example---删去an

10. importantly---important

【解析】文章针对一些人喜欢垃圾食品的现象,讲述了平衡饮食的重要性和必要性.

1. thought---think考查时态。此处陈述的是事实，要用一般现在时态。

2. That---What考查主语从句的引导词。句意：我们最需要的是平衡的饮食。表示“什么，内容”用What引导，在句中做we need的宾语，故That---What.

3. mean---means.考查主谓一致。动名词Eating a balanced diet做主语谓语用第三人称单数形式，故mean---means.

4. with---for.考查介词。此处表示为我们的身体提供各种营养，“为了”用for，故with---for.

5. Therefore---However.考查副词。句意：我们需要平衡的饮食来保持健康。许多人仍然有不健康的饮食习惯。前后句是转折关系且有逗号和下句分开，用However. Therefore “因 此” 表因果，故Therefore---However.

6. that---which.考查定语从句。根据句意和标点可知，句中will do harm to their health.是非限制性定语从句用which引导，指代前面整个句子。故that---which.

7. think is---think it is / is---it.考查句子结构。本句可以是两种结构，结构一：I think后是宾语从句，需要有主语。不定式to have three meals a day properly.做真正主语，用it做形式主语。结构二：I think是主谓，it是形式宾语，necessary是宾补，不定式to have three meals a day properly.是真正宾语。故think is---think it is / is---it.

8. eat---eating.考查省略句。When 引导的时间状语从句中省略了主语和谓语的一部分，完整句子应该是when we are eating，表示动作正在进行，故eat---eating.

9. an example---删去an.考查固定搭配。For example“例如，比如”，用于举例子，故an example---example.

10. importantly---important.考查形容词。句意：保持平衡的饮食对我们来说是非常必要的。此处是形容词做is的表语，故importantly---important.