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假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A day I happened to find a chatting room on the internet, where people were chatting on English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the fact that the spoken English of some junior students were better than mine. I asked them for an advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. What I wish I could speak English as good as these fellows! Therefore, every day after that I would spend one hour practise my spoken English on QQ. Day by day I learned many good and use words and expression. With time going by, I found that I could even communicate with some college students freely.

 

1. A→One 2. on→in 3.surprised →surprise 4. were→was 5.an去掉 6. What→ how 7.good →well 8. practise→practising 9.use→useful 10. expression →expressions 【解析】第一处:考察代词,有一天我进入一个网络聊天室,某一天one day,位于句首,第一个字母大写。故要将A改为One. 第二处:考察介词,聊天室人们用英语聊天, “用英语”应该用介词in English,故要把on改为in . 第三处:考察名词,我惊讶的发现,有些中学生口语比我好。to one’s surprise 令某人惊讶,故要将surprised 改为surprise。 第四处:考察主谓一致,有些中学生口语比我好,主语是“口语”不可数名词后谓语用单数。故要将were改为was. 第五处:考察冠词,我想他们寻求学英语的建议。“建议” advice是不可数名词,故要将an去掉. 第六处:考察虚拟语气引导词,我多希望自己的口语和小伙伴们一样好呀。How引导虚拟语气,位于句首首字母要大写。,故要将What改为 How. 第七处:考察副词,我多希望自己的口语和小伙伴们一样好呀。用副词“好”修饰动词“说”,故要将good 改为well. 第八处:考察动名词,每天我会花费一小时在qq上练习说英语,spend…doing“花费时间做某事”故要practise改为practising. 第九处:考察形容词,渐渐地,我学会了很多有用的词汇和短语。形容词修饰名词。,故要将use改为useful. 第十处:考察名词单复数,我学会了很多有用的词汇和短语, “词汇”和“短语”并列,“很多的短语”,名词应该用复数形式。故要将expression 改为expressions。 【名师点睛】 短文改错考查了词法错误、句法错误和行文逻辑,在做短文改错时,一定要细读全文,逐句分析,命题趋势主要包括: 1.一致关系:包括主谓一致、时态一致、代词指代一致等。第四处:考察主谓一致,有些中学生口语比我好,主语是“口语”不可数名词后谓语用单数。故要将were改为was. 2.平行结构:包括动词与动词相配,形容词与形容词相配,分词与分词相配,不定式与不定式相配等。常由并列连词或词组连接。如:and, or , but,neither…nor…, as well as 等. 第十处:考察名词单复数,我学会了很多有用的词汇和短语, “词汇”和“短语”并列,“很多的短语”,名词应该用复数形式。故要将expression 改为expressions。 3.非谓语动词的用法:如to的省略,过去分词与现在分词的误用等。第八处:考察动名词,每天我会花费一小时在qq上练习说英语,spend…doing“花费时间做某事”故要practise改为practising. 4.多余词:常常是介词、冠词、副词等的多余。第五处:考察冠词,我想他们寻求学英语的建议。“建议” advice是不可数名词,故要将an去掉. 5.词性的混用。第九处:考察形容词,渐渐地,我学会了很多有用的词汇和短语。形容词修饰名词。,故要将use改为useful. 6.行文逻辑判断等。  
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