Question

外教Johnson开设了一个英语辅导班(English Tutorial)，按照学生实际需要进行辅导。参加者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。假定你是李华，请给外教写一封电子邮件，要点如下：

1.介绍个人情况；

2.说明辅导意向（如：口语、语法、写作、文化知识筹其中的一项或几项）；

3.表达愿望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结尾语已为你写好。

Dear Mr.Johnson,

I am writing to you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.

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Looking forward to you reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua.

Answer

Dear Mr.Johnson,

I am writing to you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.

As a Senior Grade 3 student,I think I'm doing well in English because I always get good marks in written English tests.But I still think I am not a perfect learner because I'm not so good at spoken English,and that is what troubles me most.And when I listen to native speakers,I find it hard to catch what they talk about.Whenever I speak English,I often make some mistakes,which annoys me.So,I want to be a member in the speaking tutorial so that I can improve my spoken English and communicate better with others.I'm sure I'll do much better in it with your help.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。同学们在写这篇文章时，

要注意以下几点：1.由于主题是根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。

所以通篇的主要时态为一般现在时。

2. 文章的要点也基本上都给出来了：a.介绍个人情况；b.说明辅导意向；c.表达愿望。

3.要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【范文亮点】

1. that is what troubles me most what引导的表语从句并且在表语从句中充当宾语。

2. when I listen to native speakers, I find it hard to catch what they talk about. When引导的时间状语从句，主句中又有what引导的宾语从句并且在宾语从句中充当宾语。

3. Whenever I speak English, I often make some mistakes, which annoys me.

Whenever引导的时间状语从句，主句中又有whicht引导的定语从句并且在定语从句中充当主语。