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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Nowadays, there are a lot of films and TV plays that are adapted to popular novels or classical work. Some people think better to read the original, while others are against it.

I think reading the original is too much better than watching its film or TV version because I can experience more after reading the original. Just as a famous saying go, there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eye. Different people have different feelings about the book or a certain role. But in the film or TV version, though we can get a main idea more direct, we may miss some wonderful, even important plots. And we are easily misled by the actors or actresses, so they act according to their understand of the book.

In a word, I think reading the original is much better than watching its film or TV version.

 

【解析】第一处:考查介词。句意:如今,有许多电影和电视剧改编自流行小说或者古典作品。be adapted from…“改编自……”。故将to改为from。 第二处:考查名词。work表示“作品”是可数名词,根据语境,此处用复数。故将work改为works。 第三处:考查代词。句意:一些人认为读原著更好,而其他人是反对的。it是形式宾语,代替真正的宾语是不定式短语to read the original。故think后加it。 第四处:考查副词。句意:我认为读原著比看电影或者电视剧要好得多。much修饰比较级,too much“太多”修饰名词。故去掉much前的too。 第五处:考查动词。句意:正如一句著名的谚语说的:有一千个读者就有一千个哈姆雷特。saying是第三人称单数,谓语动词say也应使用第三人称单数,根据语境可知,句子使用一般现在时。故将go改为goes。 第六处:考查名词。eye“眼睛”是可数名词,由a thousand people修饰用复数。故将eye改为eyes。 第七处:考查冠词。句意:但是在电影或者电视剧里,尽管我们可以更直接地获得主旨大意,我们或许会错过许多极好的、甚至是重要的情节。此处特指所看电影或者电视剧的主旨大意用定冠词。故将a改为the。 第八处:考查副词。directly修饰get作状语,作状语用副词。故direct改为directly。 第九处:考查连词。句意:我们很容易被演员误导,因为他们按照他们对于书籍的理解来表演。下文是上文的原因。because引导原因状语从句。故将so改为because。 第十处:考查名词。形容词性物主代词修饰名词,understanding“理解”是名词。故将understand改为understanding。 【名师点睛】 短文改错解题思路:1. 句中各部分的结构是否完整,特别是每个句子要有动词;2. 谓语动词的时态、语态;例如第五处错误go改为goes,根据语境可知,句子讲述现在的事情,故用一般现在时,且主语是第三人称单数,故go改为goes。3. 非谓语动词的用法;4. 名词的单、复数,格的使用是否正确;例如第一处错误,work表示“作品”是可数名词,故用复数works;第六处eye是可数名词由由a thousand people修饰用复数;第十处形容词性物主代词修饰名词,understanding“理解”是名词。5. 定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;例如第七处错误,此处特指所看电影或者电视剧的主旨大意用定冠词。故将a改为the;6. 代词的格和性的使用是否有误;例如第三处错误it是形式宾语,代替真正的宾语是不定式短语to read the original。故think后加it。7. 定语从句中关系代词、关系副词是否准确无误;8. 并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。例如第九处错误,下文是上文的原因。because引导原因状语从句。故将so改为because。  
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