Question

假如你是李华，你远在美国工作的叔叔想要回国发展，来信向你询问家乡的情况。请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：

1.家乡的变化（街道、绿化、建筑）；

2.存在的问题（环境、交通）；

3.希望他为家乡做贡献。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：做贡献make contributions to

Dear uncle,

I'm glad to hear that you will come back to our homeland for development.____________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear uncle,

I'm glad to hear that you will come back to our homeland for development.I think it's a great idea to build our hometown.

Great changes have taken place in our hometown over the last few years.The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks.More and more tall buildings are being built.However,during the course of creating a more modern city,some problems appear,such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.Our city government has realized these problems and has taken measures to solve them.I think everyone should do something to make our country more beautiful.

I hope you will make great contributions to our hometown after you come back.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇将一般现在时与一般过去时相结合。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。既然该文是对叔叔的 回信，所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。该文的写作难点在第二条内容上：要介绍家乡现在与过去的不同，如今家乡存在的问题等。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】

1. 范文采取了定语从句（The streets and roads which used to be narrow are wider and cleaner now and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks）等句式。

2. 文章采用了More and more； a great idea to；used to be等高级单词或短语。