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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow. It reminds me my days when I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school. It was the first time I have lived away from my home, so I found it difficultly to fit in. And the training officer was strict with myself. I once thought I couldn’t be stick to the end. But anyway, I made it. The trials made it easy for me to adapt to my future life, but the difficulties I came across have now become the precious memory in my life.

In short, learning to regard the challenges of life as a stepping stone to future success and make the best of them.

 

【解析】本文是一篇记叙短文。作者主要讲述了自己在参加高中入学军训的事情。认为学会正视生活中的挑战对于未来取得成功具有重要意义。 考查名词。“Challenges of life are of great importance in our grow”,分析句子结构,our为物主代词,后面应该加名词。故将grow改为growth。 考查固定短语。“It reminds me my days when I joined in the military training after I entered senior high school”,句中remind sb.of sth. 使某人想起某事。故添加of。 考查动词时态。“It was the first time I have lived away from my home”,根据was,可知此句为过去时态,前后时态应保持一致。故将have改为had。 考查形容词。“ I found it difficultly to fit in”,it为代词,to为介词,因此两者之间应用形容词连接。故将difficulty改为difficult。 考查代词。“the training officer was strict with myself”,be strict with sb. ,with是介词,后面应该加名词或代词的宾格形式。故将myself改为me。 考查比较级。根据前文“ I found it difficultly to fit in”刚开始作者很难适应,“The trials made it easy for me to adapt to my future life”,军训使得作者更容易适应未来的生活,两者之间表示对比。故将easy改为easier。 考察连接词。“The trials made it easier for me to adapt to my future life”与“the difficulties I came across have now become the precious memory in my life”两者之间表示一种并列关系,都在讲述军训所带来的意义,应该用并列形式。故将but改为and。 考查冠词。“now become the precious memory in my life”,军训已经成为我生活中的一个回忆,此处表示泛指,并不是特指军训 这件事。故将the改为a。 考查动词。learning to regard the challenges of life as a stepping stone to future success and make the best of them. 由连词and可知前后为两个完整的句子表示并列,分析前句,缺少谓语动词,故将learning改为learn。 【名师点睛】短文改错主要考查考生对文章的理解以及句子结构的分析,考生可以先通读短文,整体把握短文大意再细读全文,逐句分析,把握结构,逐一作答。然后逐行修改最后复读全文,验证答案。主要考查名词单复数、动词时态语态、代词的使用、冠词的使用。 动词常见的改错形式:时态和语态,常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时,中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象;或是及物动词后无宾语,或是不及物动词后加了宾语。应仔细分析句子结构,再进行判断。例如第3题,“It was the first time I have lived away from my home”,根据was判断此句应为一般过去时,由and确定前后两句为并列结构,所以后文谓语动词也应为一般过去时,但是后文出现了现在时have,出现时态错误,故将have改为had。  
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