Question

假如你是李华，你想要在某外文书店申请一份图书导购员的兼职以丰富你的业余生活。请你给该书店写一封英文申请信，说明你想要申请这份工作的原因以及你能胜任这份工作的理由。

注意：1.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

2.词数100左右（提示：申请 application  n.  apply for …v.）

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Answer

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua, and I am a senior high school student. I’m writing to apply to work in your bookstore during my spare time. To gain some work experience and to make my life more colorful are the reasons why I apply for the job. I also know that I’m well-qualified.

First of all, I’m good at foreign literature, which makes it easy for me to give proper introductions/recommendations to customs. Second, my oral English is good, and I’m able to communicate with foreign customers fluently. Finally, I’ve worked in bookstores before, so I am familiar with how they operate. I hope you can give my application serious consideration. Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇书面申请信。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。注意长短句结合，使结构更加合理3. 注意语气。因为文章要求写的是申请信，所以语言要诚恳，做到不卑不亢。

【范文亮点】

1.文章运用了较多高分句式。例如“To gain some work experience and to make my life more colorful are the reasons why I apply for the job.”连用不定式作主语同时表达出作者的目的与意图；“I’m good at foreign literature, which makes it easy for me……”采用了非限制性定语从句，使句式丰富不单一。

2.文章整体思路清晰，结构简洁合理，而且能较好地使用连接词，使得文章十分流畅自然，值得同学们参考与学习。