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Today as I was leaving the church for home, I hear an old man saying he was cold. I was dressing in an expensive scarf. I had been a precious gift to me, so I gave it to him. In my opinion, the happiness what I receive as I see someone else happy in their hearts means many than the scarf itself.
He offered to accompanying me home and we talked all of the way to my house. For me, a material thing doesn't have a meaning until I give them to someone. Make it good one, a truly meaning of love for others.
It was freezing cold that day. At about 9:00，I 1. (drop)off at the visitor center. I intended to explore Tetons National Park 2. (I). However, I was told that there was no bus 3. (travel) to the park from town, so I had to ask for a lift.
Minutes later, a truck stopped beside me, 4. driver offered to take me there. When we came to the park 5.(enter), he handed over his park pass and got me in for free.
6. (cover) in white, Tetons National Park was attractive on that cold winter day. The sun shining and it was 7.(complete) silent. The silence was lovely, but I had to hope that it was possible to catch 8. ride back into town. As a few people passed me at the parking lot, I asked if they had any room in their car 9. if they were heading to town. “Sure! Come on in, we got a space for you!” they replied.
I was grateful 10. their kindness and I was taught again that regardless of where you are in the world，beautifully unconventional things can and do happen.
Dusty is my son Jack's favorite pet. They have a special connection that is a____to see. After she finishes her dinner at night, Dusty will run into Jack's room to____on the pillow beside hDuring the day she'll______him around, jump into his.and even ___ with a “meow” every time he calls her name.
______，a few weeks ago Dusty began to lose_______.She ate less and less and lost some of her fur. She ____going after Jack around and hid in my daughter's old closet (壁橱). She___ only to drink water and then quickly returned there. I was ___that we were going to lose her and prayed to God that she'd return to __ . I didn't want Jack to lose his furry friend. ___after a few weeks she started to spend time outside the __ again. In addition , her __ recovered. Soon her fur grew back and she gained weight. Once again she became my son's constant __ and I thanked God for bringing her back to him.
I can __ why she'd gone off by herself to take the time to heal (康复）from her illness. There have been many times in my own life when fear, sickness and sadness have beaten me and I've just needed to find a quiet place in my own __ to think and to heal.
__，every time I've done so my heart is filled with God's __，making me better and stronger than I was before.
When life beats you down, don't __.Go within. Allow God’s love to fill you and to heal you. And then go out and __ that love with the world.
1.A. shock B. delight C. honor D. prize
2.A. sleep B. hide C. hunt D. guard
3.A. Look for B. run into C. guide D. follow
4.A. reward B. challenge C. answer D. impress
5.A. Besides B. However C. Therefore D. Instead
6.A. memory B. sight C. hearing D. weight
7.A. delayed B. risked C. stopped D. escaped
8.A. came out B. set out C. called out D. worked out
9.A. embarrassed B. disappointed C. relieved D. worried
10.A. safety B. health C. calm D. peace
11.A. Thankfully B. Interestingly C. Mercifully D. Undoubtedly
12.A. pillow B. suitcase C. closet D. kitchen
13.A. pride B. appetite C. confidence D. D.curiosity
14.A. relative B. colleague C. neighbor D. companion
15.A. prove B. forecast C. understand D. guarantee
16.A. soul B. view C. choice D. opinion
17.A. Honestly B. Joyfully C. Eventually D. Regretftilly
18.A. behavior B. happiness C. words D. love
19.A. give up B. turn back C. march on D. keep on
20.A. link B. compare C. share D. exchang
Making a lifestyle change is challenging, especially when you want to transform many things at once. Here are some tips to help you：
Make a plan thal you can stick to. Your plan is a map that will guide you on this journey of change. 1.When making your plan，be specific. Want to exercise more? Detail the time of day when you can take walks and how Long you'll walk. Poet your plan where you'll most often see it as a reminder.
Start small. Break down your goals into small, manageable steps. Is your long-term goal to lose 20 pounds within the next five raontlis? 2.If you'd like to eat healthier, consider a goal for the week replacing dessert with a healthier option, like fruit or yogurt. At the end of the week, you’ 11 feel successful knowing you have met your goal.
Change one behavior at a time. Replacing unhealthy behaviors with healthy ones requires lime. 3. To improve your success, focus on one goal or change at a time. As new healthy behaviors become a habit, try to add another goal that works toward the overall change.
4.Accepting help from those who care about you and will Listen strengthens your commitment. If you feel unable to meet your goals on your own，consider seeking help from a psychologist. Psychologists are uniquely trained to understand the connection between the mind and body, as well es the factors that promote behavior change.
Making the changes that you want takes time and commiment, but you can do it.Just remember that no one is perfect. Minor missteps on the road to your goals are normal and okay. 5.
A. Ask for support.
B. Be kind to yourself.
C. You can even think of it as an adventure.
D. Be determined to recover and get back on track.
E. You’ve tried before, but without feeling much success.
F. A good weekly goal would be to lose one pound a week.
G. Many people run into problems when they try to change too much too fast.
A recent study led by researchers from ihe National University of Singapore ( NUS) has found a clear link between the color o£ a taxi and its accident rate. An analysis of 36 months of detailed taxi，driver and accident data from two fleets of yellow and blue taxis in Singapore
suggested that yellow taxis have fewer accidents than blue taxis. The higher visibility (能见度）of yellow makes it less difficult for drivers to avoid getting into accidents with yellow taxis, leading to a lower accident rate.
The study was led by Prof Ho. To test whether there was a relationship between the color of a taxi and the number of accidents the taxi had, the research team analysed data collected by the largest taxi company in Singapore. The researchers found that yellow taxis have about 6. 1 fewer accidents per 1,000 taxis per month.
They also studied the economic effect of changing the color of the entire fleet of taxis to yellow. The Singapore taxi company involved in the study owns about 16,700 taxis in a ratio (比例〉of one yellow to three blue taxis. If a commercial decision is made to switch from blue to yellow taxis, 76.6 fewer accidents will occur per month or 917 fewer accidents per year.Assuming an average repair cost of $1,000 per car and a downtime of six days，switching the color of all taxis to yellow could produce an annual saving of $2 million.
“We are eager to continue to validate(证实）the findings of our study by looking at the use of yellow in other types of public transport, such as school buses. For example, we hope to compare (he accident rates of yellow school buses against those of other colors lo find out if yellow is indeed a safer color for school buses. Besides, we're also interested to look al private-hire vehicles and do a comparison of the accident rates of vehicles that are of differenl colors,” explained Prof Ho.
1.Why do yellow taxis result in fewer accidents?
A. Because yellow can be seen more easily.
B. Because yellow signals a warning of clanger.
C. Because drivers tend to be more careful in yellow taxis.
D. Because people act more quickly in yellow surroundings.
2.What's Prof Ho'S study based on?
A. Physical risks taxi passengers experience.
B. The economic effect of changing taxi color.
C. Data from Singapore's largest taxi company.
D. Personal reports from taxi drivers worldwide.
3.What do Prof Ho’s words in the last paragraph suggest?
A. Their study will be furthered.
B. Their findings are worth popularizing.
C. School buses should be painted yellow.
D. Yellow should be widely used in public transport.
4.What can be the best title for the text?
A. Caution： yellow taxis ahead.
B. Safer to ride in yellow taxis.
C. Why are yellow taxis preferred?
D. How can colors help prevent accidents?
Every March, the Country celebrates .he accomplishments oilmen in American history. Even though these accomplishments go back a long way, most schools didn't start focusing on women pioneers and their achievements until recently. Today, most colleges offer classes in women's history and most schools teach kids about the many contribtions women have made to our country.
On March 19，1911，a German woman named Clara Zetkin organized the very first International Women's Day. Inspired by American working women, the annual event took on the causes of peace and women' s rights. In the 1960s, the women 's movement caused women to wonder why they weren't included in the history books.
By the 1970s, more female historians began to look back at the contributions of women in history. In 1978, a California school district started Women's History Week to promote the leaching of women' s history. School officials picked the week of March 8 to include International Women's Day. It was so popular that, in 1981, Congress passed a law making the week a celebration for the entire country. The concept of studying women's history
continued to grow in popularity. In 1987, a group of women asked Congress to amplify the celebration. That same year, Congress declared the entire month of March National Women's History Month.
Today, schools and communities across the country celebrate the month with special lessons and activities designed to teach the ways women have helped shape the U.S. The women who have worked hard to make Women's History Month a reality would like to see women s history studied all year, not just every March. In 1996, the National Women' s History Museum was founded. It's a non-profit organization devoted to preserving and clebrating the various contributions of women in histoty. The organization is working with
Congress to open a permanent museum site in Washington, D. C.
1.What does the first paragraph imply?
A. More women pioneers are needed in America.
B. Women's achievements u»ed to be ignored in America.
C. Celebrating women's achievements has a long history in America.
D. Few American schools pay attention to women’s contributions.
2.According to the text, International Womenys Day__________.
A. is held every second year
B. was started by an American
C. has a history of over a century
D. was a product of women's movement
3.Which of the following words can replace the underlined word “amplify” in Paragraph 3?
A. expand B. support
C. organize D. protect
4.What can we know about the National Women’s History Museum from the text?
A. It was set up less than two decades ago.
B. It has a permanent site in Washington, D.
C. It U an organization aimed at making profits.
D. It focuses on women's historic contributions.
