Question

某国内一家英语报社在网上发布通知，准备面向高中生招聘一名暑假英语助理编辑，负责该报“中国传统节日”栏目的校对(proof reading)工作。假设你叫李华，请给该报社发一封邮件，申请该职位。邮件内容包括:

1.得知该招聘信息;

2.申请该职位的理由;

3.希望尽快得到回复。

要求:1.词数:100词左右。结尾已给出，不计入总词数;

2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m so glad to read your notice on the Internet that yout paper needs an English assistant editor in summer vacation to be in charge of the proof-reading of the section called “Chinese Traditional Festivals”.I think I am the very person you are looking for.The reasons are as follows.Firstly.I am a senior three student,who will soon graduate from my school and I have enough spare time.Secondly, I love our Chinese traditional festivals and know them very well.Moreimportantly,I have a good knowledge of English.To sum up,I am 100%confident that I am fit for the position.

I’d appreciate it if you can give me an early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如To sum up,Moreimportantly,使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3.注意语气，此文是写申请信的英语短文，所以语气上应该比较诚恳，不应该出现过多的强硬语气的词语。

4.此作文要分四个部分写，每个部分要更完整，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如I’m so glad to read your notice on the Internet that yout paper needs an English assistant editor in summer vacation to be in charge of the proof-reading of the section called “Chinese Traditional Festivals”.

5.多采用一些高级句型，如I think I am the very person you are looking for。To sum up,I am 100%confident that I am fit for the position.同时使用一些词组如be glad to，notice on ，in charge of，look for，be graduate from， have a good knowledge of ，be fit for等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中I am a senior three student,who will soon graduate from my school and I have enough spare time.使用的是定语从句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如be glad to，notice on ，in charge of，look for，be graduate from， have a good knowledge of ，be fit for 等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语使衔接自然。