Question

假设你是李华，在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事 ：希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化。请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

(1)你怎样得知David的愿望

(2) 你愿意成为他的朋友

(3) 你打算如何帮助他。

注意：(1)电子邮件的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数

(2)词数：100左右。

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Answer

Dear David,

I've learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture. I'm glad that you show such great interest in China and I would like to be your friend.

I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture. When you have an opportunity to come to China, I'll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can. How do you think?

I'm looking forward to your reply .

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，文章要点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下几点：

1.整篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。

2.要点要齐全，但是不要进行简单的罗列，可以采用适当的连接词，或者是表递进关系的副词如What’s worse、In view of the above、First of all、Besides，使上下文衔接自然，行文自然流畅。

3 .要列举一下例子，最好用简单句与复合句结合的方法写作如we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to disease。

4.多采用一些高级句型，如we’d better wear masks when we go outside，It’s one of the most dangerous weather conditions，同时使用一些词组如due to ， result from，get enough，build up等。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等，就如文中I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture句。再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如文中looking forward to，try my best to，have an opportunity to以及be glad that等。最后就是要段落清新，层次分明。就像文中要多使用一些连接词语如Anyway、Besides等，使衔接自然。