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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Recently I have started a new job in a small office, which four of us share a water filter(净水器). One of my coworker complained the water tasted "dirty", and she is astonished I could drink the water with any trouble. I even started to doubt my taste buds, but the water really tastes fine. Finally, she figured out the problem was actually my cup, which she simply forgot to clean.

I can't help but to think about the world we live. Too often we quickly blame other people, other things, something else but ourselves. The world isn't perfect, I know, but I think we should take the step back sometimes and ask ourselves some tough questions. Can I be better? Is my heart really pure? …

Please clean your cup. Because when you do, the water will taste much good. I promise you this.

 

【解析】第一处:考查定语从句。句意:最近我在一间小办公室里开始了我的新工作,在这间办公室里,我们中的四个人共用一个净水器。分析句子结构和句意,可判断逗号后的句子为定语从句,修饰先行词office;逗号后的句子完整,所以需用关系副词在定语从句中作状语,又因为先行词是地点,所以用where引导,故要把which改为where。 第二处:考查名词复数。这里表示她的同事之一,one of后应接名词复数,故要将coworker改为coworkers。 第三处:考查时态。这里讲述过去发生的事,故要将is改为was。 第四处:考查介词。此处是说我的同事很诧异我喝这里的水却没有任何事,且根据后面的不定代词any trouble,可知这里不可能是肯定句,故要将with改为without。 第五处:考查形容词性物主代词。联系上下文可知,作者的同事觉得水不干净但作者觉得没事,那么问题应该出在她同事的杯子上,故要将my改为her。 第六处:考查固定用法。can't help but do表示“不得不做”,故要将to去掉。 第七处:考查介词。live是不及物动词,we live在这里做后置定语,当其与名词相接时需要接一个介词,根据其所接的名词world,故要在live后加介词in。 第八处:考查不定代词。句意:我们经常很快责怪别人,其他事情,任何事情除了我们自己。something else表示说话人知道是什么只是不提及,anything else表示说话人不知道是什么但知道一个范围,在这里作者不确定是什么具体的东西,故要把something改为anything。 第九处:考查冠词。the是定冠词表示特指,a是不定冠词表示泛指,这里表示退一步的意思,step并不需要特指,故要将the改为a。 第十处:考查形容词比较级。much是表示程度的副词,后接形容词或副词的比较级,表示加强比较级的语气,故要将good改为比较级better。 【名师点睛】 在本篇短文改错中,难点在于:1.定语从句中关系词的改正。关系词根据其在定语从句中的功能可分为关系代词(which,that,who,whomwhose…)和关系副词(where,when,why…)。 关系代词在定语从句中作主语,宾语,表语,定语等。 关系副词在定语从句中作状语,when在定语从句中充当时间状语,where在定语从句中充当地点状语,why在定语从句中充当原因状语。 因此可通过观察从句中主要缺少哪些成分,而判断是使用关系代词还是关系副词。 例如:第一处将which改为where。先行词是a small office,而定语从句中 four of us share a water filter缺少相对应的地点状语,故将which改为where。  
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