Question

你校英文报开展“旅游的利弊”专栏，请你根据下列提示，写一箱短文，谈谈你对旅游的看法。

内容提示：

1.放松自己；

2.开阔视野；

3.结交朋友；

4.劳累和费钱。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

When talking about travel, we may immediately think of its advantages.

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Answer

When talking about travel, we may immediately think of its advantages. Travel is a good way to relax yourself. We usually go to work every day, making us bored and tired. Travel can make us forget our boring work for a little while. Besides, travel can broaden our view and make our experience rich. There are many more other advantages of travelling. We can visit many deferent places and make new friends, just as the old saying.“One should read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand kilometers”.

However, there are disadvantages of travel. For example, it is costly and tiring. So we’d better choose a proper form for ourselves.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇专栏征文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇专栏征文；你校英文报开展“旅游的利弊”专栏，为此你写一篇短文，谈谈你对旅游的看法，内容包括：1.放松自己；2.开阔视野；3.结交朋友；4.劳累和费钱。本文时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：relax yourself（放松自己），broaden our view （开阔视野），advantage（优势），make new friends（结交朋友），disadvantage（弊端），costly and tiring（劳累和费钱）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如不定式Travel is a good way to relax yourself.；现在分词We usually go to work every day, making us bored and tired.；make复合结构Besides, travel can broaden our view and make our experience rich. 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外besides，however，for example，so等词（组）的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。