Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’t understand ‘real music’. After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoy. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer

1.Learn-learning

2.Therefore-However

3.at-from

4. started- start

5.all-both

6.that-which

7.my the 中的the去掉

8.time后加to

9. model-models

10. importantly-important

【解析】1.Learn-learning.考查动词。固定句式：spend…in doing sth.（花费……做某事），故Learn-learning.

2.Therefore-However.考查副词。上文说我花十年的时间学小提琴，下文转折了，可知句意：然而，我还是不明白真正的音乐。故Therefore-However.

3.at-from.考查介词。固定词组：graduate from（从……毕业），故at-from.

4. started- start.考查动词。动词suggest（建议）后的宾语从句要用虚拟语气，即(should)+do，故started- start.

5.all-both.考查代词。此处的we是指我和我的那个朋友，指两个人，所以要用both，故all-both.

6.that-which.考查代词。定语从句，关系代词代替先行词the day，在从句中作介词on的宾语，而且on提前了，不能用关系代词that，故that-which.

7.my the 中的the去掉.考查冠词。冠词不能与物主代词同时用在名词前，故my the 中的the去掉.

8.time后加to .考查不定式。固定句式：It takes sb. some time to do sth.（花费某人多少时间去做某事），it是形式主语，不定式是真正的主语，故.time后加to .

9. model-models.考查名词。可数名词model（模型）前有several（几，几个）修饰，所以要用复数形式，故model-models.

10. importantly-important.考查形容词。形容词important（重要的）作定语，修饰名词part（部分），故importantly-important.