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Dear Mr. Cousins,
Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advices on how to form a band.
I, together by two boys and two girls from different classes in our school, wanted to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance, but they still have many problems to solve. I’d like to know that we should play one kind of music or different style to start with. And is it enough to practice only at weekends? Why can we get more chances to perform? In addition, we’d appreciate if you would be come up with a name for our band.
Thanks to your considering our above questions, Mr. Cousins. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Do you have sleeping problems? If so, then these tips may help you fall asleep fast.
Set aside the thought that you have to fall asleep. The more you think of it, the 1. (hard) you will fall asleep.
The foods you eat also play an important part. Avoid 2. (eat) or drinking things like chocolates, coffee, tea and energy drinks. If you have to, then have 3. in the morning and never in the afternoon, especially before going to bed. Don’t eat too 4. at night. A full stomach will make it more difficult for you to fall asleep because your body is working more time to 5. the food you ate.
Make a 6. (fix) time to go to bed. For example, by 9 o’clock in the evening you should already be in bed. Do this even if you’re not sleepy yet. Once following this routine, you will 7. (gradual) see that you feel sleepy 8. it’s 9 o’clock.
Make your room comfortable for sleeping. You should also take note that the sleeping environment also 9. (affect) you sleep. It must be in the room 10. it’s not noisy. Otherwise, you will find it difficult to fall asleep again after waking up.
Tu Youyou has become the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize, for her work in helping to __ an anti-malaria (抗疱疾) medicine. The 84-year-old’s route to the honour has been anything __ traditional.
Tu Youyou went to a __ school in Beijing. Shortly after, she became a researcher at the Academy of Chinese Traditional Medicine. In 1967, Chinese government decided there was an national __ to find a cure for malaria. __ the time, malaria __ by mosquitoes was killing Chinese soldiers fighting Americans in the jungles of northern Vietnam. A secret research unit was __ to find a __ of the illness.
Two years later, Tu Youyou became the new __ of the research team. She went to the southern Chinese island of Hainan to study __ malaria damaged human __. For six months, she stayed there. __ her four-year-old daughter at a local nursery.
__ Chinese texts inspired Tu Youyou’s search for her Nobel-prize winning medicine. She and her teammates poured over ancient books to find __ ways of fighting malaria.
__ the team found a brief reference to one substance,which had been used to treat malaria in China around 400 AD.
After the drug showed __ results in mice and monkeys ,Tu Youyou volunteered to be the __ human recipient(接受者) of the new drug.
Fuming Liao, who has worked with Tu Youyou for more than 40 years, __ her as a “tough and __ woman” Stubborn enough to spend decades reading ancient texts and use them in modern scientific __. The result has saved millions of lives.
1.A. do B. create C. give D. test
2.A. and B. while C. whether D. but
3.A. medical B. cold C. excellent D. affordable
4.A. wonder B. doubt C. need D. expression
5.A. In B. After C. Before D. At
6.A. spread B. offered C. held D. said
7.A. opened B. fixed C. formed D. invented
8.A. hand B. treatment C. cure D. rescue
9.A. head B. judge C. researcher D. workmate
10.A. where B. when C. what D. how
11.A. power B. ability C. health D. concern
12.A. asking B. letting C. leaving D. sending
13.A. Ancient B. Many C. Reliable D. New
14.A. useful B. historical C. hopeful D. helpful
15.A. Finally B. Exactly C. Gradually D. Frequently
16.A. grateful B. active C. hopeful D. thankful
17.A. only B. first C. willing D. right
18.A. tells B. describes C. speaks D. thinks
19.A. stubborn B. hard C. generous D. educated
20.A. classes B. conditions C. styles D. research
Red envelopes have been related to the Chinese Lunar New Year for long. I myself have had plenty of experiences both receiving and giving out red envelopes in the past, 1. I mean, who doesn’t love free money?
I’m truly surprised by the extent of people’s obsession with virtual red envelopes this year. In fact, everyone I know spent at least a day or two crazily shaking their smart phones, 2. Thanks to messaging app giant We Chat’s new feature which allows users to send money electronically, grabbing virtual red envelopes has never seemed so easy.
3. here’s how it works. Givers link their We Chat to their bank accounts, and then they can send specified amounts of money to their We Chat accounts through a personal message. They can also put the cash up for grabs in chat groups full of friends, and anyone who acts fast enough will get a share. 4.
In theory, this sounds like a fun game. I’m always for some harmless fun in life, so my natural response would be: Why not? Moreover, I’ve always believed that it’s human nature to want free stuff, regardless of whether you actually need it or not. This may not be a good quality, but it’s not against the law, 5. Considering these reasons, I really can’t fault anyone for their enthusiasm in grabbing virtual red envelopes. I would have done it too, had I not thought linking We Chat to my bank accounts was too much trouble.
A. and we know everyone likes money.
B. and generally speaking, it’s been fun.
C. if you want to be good at grabbing a red envelope.
D. Just in case you are one of the very few people still not on the bandwagon,
E. mostly trying to get as much lucky money as possible.
F. so I won’t get all judgmental here.
G. Later，receivers can transfer the funds from their We Chat back into their own bank accounts.
Long nights of winter can leave even the most positive people feeling cranky(古怪的).But for about 5% of Americans, it’s more serious: seasonal affective disorder (SAD) is a type of depression that most occurs in the winter. Symptoms include loss of energy, eating more and difficulty in concentrating.
The cause of SAD is unknown, but darker days probably play a role. Reduced levels of natural sunlight can disrupt your body’s internal clock, which can lead to depression. It also causes a drop in serotonin (血清素)，a feel-good brain chemical. Severe cases may need antidepressant treatment. You can’t prevent the disorder from developing, but you can ease the symptoms.
Consider light therapy
Exposure to bright light that mimics(模仿)natural light is thought to affect mood-related brain chemicals and ease symptoms. It involves sitting in front of a special light box or wearing a cap-like lighted visor (盔甲)，for about 30 minutes a day. Another therapy uses a “dawn simulator” that is turned on early in the morning and gradually increases in brightness, allowing your body to wake up naturally. Light therapy can have minor side effects, such as eye strain and headaches, and it isn’t recommended for people with skin sensitivity.
Go outside
Yes, even if it’s cold and cloudy. Natural light is still good for you, and it can relieve your symptoms, especially if you head outdoors within two hours of waking up. At home, open the blinds and drapes to let in the light.
Eat right and exercise
Two health basics can help here, too. A well-balanced diet can improve energy levels, and regular physical activity works to boost your mood and ease stress and anxiety which can aggravate SAD symptoms.
Spend time with friends
Make an effort to see people you enjoy, even when you’re down. Staying connected to your social circle and participating in your regular activities can offer great support during the winter months.
1.Which of the following about SAD is NOT true?
A. It most occurs in the winter.
B. It may result in the absence of concentration.
C. It results from too much exposure to the sun.
D. Causes remain to be discovered.
2.Light therapy .
A. is of no use unless being exposed to the sun for about 30 minutes a day
B. is a good way to anyone
C. can prevent seasonal affective disorder from developing
D. doesn’t suit those with skin sensitivity
3.What does the underlined word “aggravate” mean in the passage?
A. To make something worse. B. To get rid of something.
C. To make anything better. D. To get anything changed.
4.Which column could the passage come from?
A. Education. B. Finance.
C. Travel. D. Science.
Captain Henry, a 98-year-old American retired fisherman, has become a first-time author, having written and published his autobiography In a Fisherman’s Language after learning to read at the age of 91.
Mr. Henry spent most of his life without even his closest family members knowing he was illiterate (不识字的). Forced to quit school in the third grade to take odd jobs, he kept the secret close to his chest, only telling his late wife. Henry’s granddaughter, Marlisa, told reporters how he used tricks, like waiting for others to order at restaurants first, to avoid the issue.
A family dispute in his nineties, she said, aroused his desire for education. “He signed a document he could not read about where he was going to live,” Marlisa said. Starting with his name, he eventually moved on to the ABC’s and children’s books. He put them down since his wife fell ill. After the tragic loss of his wife, he went back to reading and began to log his life. He wrote about his family’s voyage from Portugal to the US, how he went on to captain a boat, and his many journeys at sea.
His life stories have become so popular that nearly 800 copies were sold in the first two weeks after the book’s release. One thousand more have been printed as requests for the book flood in as far as Germany. And now even Hollywood producers have approached Mr. Henry about buying the rights to his life stories for a big screen adaptation.
The family also now has a book agent and a deal in the works to publish a second edition. Meanwhile, the family says they are reconnecting and closer than ever as a result of Henry’s late-life efforts. “Everyone has a story, Marlisa said. “It teaches that when you’re down and out. never give up.”
1.When did Henry begin writing his life story?
A. After his wife passed away.
B. Before his wife passed away.
C. When he was at the age of 91.
D. After he retired from work.
2.Which of the following is TRUE according to the text?
A. Henry didn’t love his wife.
B. A Hollywood producer wishes to make a movie out of Henry’s book.
C. Henry began his reading with some famous novels.
D. Henry’s book was well-received by Americans and he made a lot of money.
3.How did Henry’s family benefit from the 2nd edition?
A. The family got known in the US.
B. His family moved from Portugal to the US.
C. The family ties were rebuilt and strengthened.
D. His family spread abroad.
4.What message can Henry’s story give us?
A. Writing can make people rich.
B. A person should write his story.
C. One is never too old to learn.
D. Everything comes to him who waits.
