假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please? I'm going to talk about something focusing in Protecting Wildlife. So far millions of species have died off or, have endangered mainly for two reasons. For one thing, man has been killing them for food or other commercial reasons. Take antelopes for example. Poachers hunt them for their fur, that can be made into luxurious shawls. For another, human civilization has been developing very fast that man has invaded and destroyed wild animals' natural habitats. Human activity have greatly threatened their existence. If all the wild animals disappear one day from the planet, humans would feel lonely. The world is beautiful for its diversity. Besides, some animals are extreme useful in the field of science, while others are especially adorable, unique, and keep us a good company. However, we should learn to share the earth with them. Thank you for your time.
1.Being tall was Yao Ming's __________ over other players.
2.Honesty is one of the most valued q__________.
3.Our service in the school has been extended, which means we can't expect __________ until 65.（退休）
4.H__________ from view by a row of tall trees, the house is hard to spot.
5.Public __________ is preferred by many commuters （通勤者）to avoid traffic jams.
6.Moon landings m__________ a new beginning of an era.
7.His __________（多文化的） background won him the post as an international market manager.
8.Seeing the injured driver s__________ to his feet, I stopped him immediately.
9.It is theoretically possible to bring e__________ animals back to life.
10.The movie “Lalaland”（爱乐之城）is well __________ watching.
Carnival today is an international experience, creating a 1. (relax) atmosphere. To understand 2. (it) origin and meaning, we need to look at the history of America. The 3.(arrive) of Europeans in America, and the opening of huge farms and plantations meant there was a need for labor force. This was how the slave trade began. For more than two hundred years, millions of black people were taken 4.force from Africa and shipped to the New World, 5. there were mainly British and French landowners.
6. (Nature), the Europeans also imported their own festivals. So the slaves
7. (force) to watch as the masters celebrated carnival. Then the slaves began to hold their own carnival celebrations, imitating and making fun of their masters. But their own traditions were continued: They walked round a village with their faces 8.(paint) white, wearing masks and singing.
9. the slave trade was abolished in 1838 the former slaves look over the carnival, which became a celebration of freedom.
With the passing of lime, the white people began to participate in the carnival, too. And they were welcomed by their former slaves. Carnival became 10.way to unite different communities, and has become a celebration of life itself.
I was never very neat, while my roommate Kate was extremely organized. Each of her objects had its place, but mine always hid_______. She even labeled（贴标签）everything . I _______looked for everything. Over time, Kate got neater and I got messier. She would push my dirty clothes over, and I would lay my books on her_______desk. We both got _______of each other.
War broke _______one evening. Kate came into the room , Soon, I heard her screaming ."Take your shoes away! Why under my bed!"_______, I saw my _______ flying at me. I jumped to my_______ and started yelling. She yelled back louder.
The room was filled with anger. We_______not have stayed together for another minute but for a phone call, Kate answered________. From her end of the conversation, I could ________ right away her grandma was seriously ill. When she ________, she quickly crawled under her covers, sobbing.
________, that was not something she should not________alone, All of a sudden, a warm feeling of sympathy rose up in my heart.
Slowly, I ________ the pencils, took back the books, made my bed, cleaned the socks and swept the floor, even on her side. I got so into my work that I even didn't notice Kate had sat up. She was watching. Her tears dried and her expression of ________. Then, she reached out her hands to grasp mine, I looked up into her eyes, she smiled at me, "________"
Kate and I stayed ________ for the rest of the year. We didn't always ________, but we learned the key to living together: ________, cleaning up and holding on.
1.A. nowhere B. everywhere C. somewhere D. anywhere
2.A. seldom B. always C. hardly D. steadily
3.A. tidy B. messy C. individual D. specific
4.A. concerned B. familiar C. curious D. tired
5.A. off B. out C. up D. down
6.A. Deafened B. Confused C. Panicked D. Terrified
7.A. books B. clothes C. shoes D. covers
8.A. bed B. desk C. floor D. feet
9.A. could B. must C. should D. need
10.A. herself B. it C. me D. them
11.A. guarantee B. declare C. tell D. spot
12.A. dressed up B. made up C. gave up D. hung up
13.A. Ultimately B. Dramatically C. Obviously D. Gratefully
14.A. go through B. take up C. focus on D. pass by
15.A. laid B. offered C. compared D. collected
16.A. disagreement B. disbelief C. disappointment D. dissatisfaction
17.A. Enough B. Thanks C. Stop D. Well done
18.A. competitors B. companions C. roommates D. volunteers
19.A. agree B. disturb C. unite D. protest
20.A. setting in B. lying in C. consisting in D. giving in
Eat your vegetables. Wash your hands. Always say "please" and "thank you". We are full of advice for our children.1.As a result, our children may grow up with clean hands and good manners, but without any idea how to manage their money.
Here are some basics that will help guide them their entire lives:
Show them the future. If your 13-year-old girl were to save $1,000, invest it at 8% and add $100 every month, by the time she's 65, she would have $980,983!
Be careful of credit. Credit cards can help you buy necessary things and build a credit history, but they must be used responsibly. 2. Explain to your children that when you buy something using a credit card, you can easily end up paying two or three times what you would have paid if you used cash.
3.Suppose your child wants a new bicycle that costs $150. Rather than paying the cash, give him some regular pocket money and explain that by putting aside, say, $15 a week, he will be able to buy it for himself in only ten weeks.
Explain your values. 4.When your child demands that you buy something, explain way you really don't went to buy it. You might say, "I'd rather save that money for your education" 5.
A. Every time you spend or don't spend money, you have a chance to share your values.
B. Provide encouragement.
C. That means paying off your debt in time.
D. Teach patience.
E. Values and money interact.
F. But when it comes to money, we often have little to say.
G. Tell your children the importance of saving.
Professor Barry Wellman of the University of Toronto in Canada has invented a term to describe the way many North Americans interact (互动) these days. The term is "networked individualism". This concept is not easy to understand because the words seem to have opposite meanings. How can we be individuals (个体) and be networked at the same time? You need other people for networks.
Here is what Professor Wellman means. Before the invention of the Internet and e-mail, our social networks included live interactions with relatives, neighbors, and friends. Some of the interaction was by phone, but it was still voice to voice, person to person, in real time.
A recent research study by the Pew Internet and American Life Project showed that for a lot of people, electronic interaction through the computer has replaced this person-to-person interaction. However, a lot of people interviewed for the Pew study say that's a good thing. Why?
In the past, many people were worried that the Internet isolated (孤立) us and caused us to spend too much time in the imaginary world of the computer. But the Pew study discovered that the opposite is true. The Internet connects us with more real people than expected－helpful people who can give advice on careers, medical problems, raising children, and choosing a school or college. About 60 million Americans told Pew that the Internet plays an important role in helping them make major life decisions.
Thanks to the computer. We are able to be alone and together with other people－at the same time!
1.The underlined phrase "networked individualism" probably means that by using computers people ________.
A. have the rights and freedom to do things of their own interest
B. are able to keep to themselves but at the same time reach out to other people
C. do things in their own ways and express opinions different from other people
D. stick to their own ways no matter what other people say
2.It can be inferred from the Pew study that ________.
A. people have been separated from each other by using computers
B. the Internet makes people waste a lot of time and feel very lonely
C. the Internet has become a tool for a new kind of social communication
D. a lot of people regard the person-to-person communication as a good thing.
3.According to the Pew study, what do many people rely on to make major life decision?
A. Parents. B. Friends. C. Phones. D. Network.
4.Which would be the best title for this passage?
A. We're Alone on the Internet B. We're Communicating on the Internet
C. We're Alone Together on the Internet D. We're in the Imaginary World of the Internet
