Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It is no doubt that health is the most important thing in our life.As a Chinese proverb go, “Health is blessing”.Should we be always ill in bed, how can we enjoy life?

    To keep healthy, we must develop a healthy way of life.First of all, we should keep on doing sports on a regularly basis, because it can strengthen both our body and mind, refresh ourselves and making us work more efficiently.Secondly, we must keep balanced diet to provide our body with various nutrition we need, but we should refuse junk food.Remember, it is through the mouth where diseases enter into our body.Thirdly, a good sleep is also vital to our health.Stay up too late at night often results in poor health.As middle school students, we need better sleep to do better in our lessons.

Answer

1. It→there 2. go→goes 3. can→could 4. regularly→regular 5. making→make 6. keep后加a 7. but→and 8. where→that 9. 去掉into 10. stay→staying

【解析】第一处：考查固定句型。There is no doubt that...是固定句型，表示“毫无疑问”，故要把It改为There。

第二处：考查主谓一致。主语是a Chinese proverb，陈述的是客观事实，谓语应该用第三人称单数形式，故把go改为goes。

第三处：考查情态动词。how could表示预期强烈或责备的意思，而how can没有这种意思，故要将can改为could。

第四处：考查形容词。修饰名词basis需要用形容词作定语，故要将regularly改为regular。

第五处：考查动词。此处与strengthen和refresh并列作谓语，且位于情态动词can之后，故要将making改为make。

第六处：考查冠词。keep a balanced diet表示“保持均衡的饮食”，故要在keep后加a。

第七处：考查连词。由句意可知，此处表示语意的承接而不是转折，故要将but改为and。

第八处：考查强调句型。此处为强调句型，其结构为It is+被强调部分+that+其余部分，故要将where改为that。强调句去掉It is和that之后句子仍然是完整的。

第九处：考查介词。Enter是及物动词，后面直接接宾语，故去掉into。

第十处：考查非谓语动词。由句子结构可知，此处为动名词作主语，故要将stay改为staying。

【名师点睛】强调句型是英语中的一种常见句型，判断强调句型的依据是去掉It is和that（who）之后句子仍然是完整的。如本题第八处错误所在的句子it is through the mouth where diseases enter into our body.去掉it is和where后：Diseases enter into our body through the mouth.句子仍然成立，故判断此句是强调句型，强调句型的结构是：It is+被强调部分+that(who)…，故要把where改为that。