Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

With the growing popularity of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies.

Comparing with online games, many traditional games, like hide-and-seek, benefits kids mentally and physically. They were ever popular with several generations, which not only learned anything valuable but also enjoyed playing the games. Therefore, the games are dying away now.

Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children’s Internet time. Let children to know the harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. Help children judge healthy and unhealthy games. What’s more, we should often organize events for children in which traditional games played.

Answer

1.play→playing

2.especial→especially

3.Comparing→Compared

4.benefits→benefit

5.which→who

6.anything→something

7.Therefore→However

8.measure→measures

9.know前面的to去掉

10.played前加are

【解析】

试题分析：本文介绍了现在的孩子沉迷于网游，建议家长老师要限制孩子上网时间，多玩传统游戏开发智力。

1.→playing 考查动名词。be addicted to沉溺于……，to是介词，后接动名词或名词，故改为playing。

2.→especially 考查副词。副词作状语，故用especially。

3.Comparing→Compared 考查非谓语动词。Compare的逻辑主语是traditional games，它和online games都属于被比较的对象，故用过去分词compared。

4.→benefit 考查主谓一致。主语是games，是复数形式，所以谓语动词也要用复数形式，不能用三单，故改为benefit。

5.which→who 考查连词。此处为定语从句，先行词是generations，指代人的，故用关系代词who。

6.anything→something 考查不定代词。此处意为“有价值的东西”，而不是任何东西，故用something。

7.→However 考查连词。此处前后句之间是转折关系，而不是因果关系，故用however。

8.measure→measures 考查名词单复数。take measures to do 是固定搭配，意为“采取措施做……”。

9.know前面的to去掉 考查固定搭配。let sb do sth让某人做某事，故需要去掉to。

10.played前加are 考查语态。游戏是被玩，要用被动语态，故要在played前加are。

【名师点睛】

短文改错口诀

名词数、动词形。

形副互混辩分明。

介词多用错与少，

连词转折与平行，

冠词错误常出现，

代词前后易错乱。

逻辑错误偶尔有，

认真阅读别遗漏。

考点：考查短文改错