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假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

      2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’m tiring. I’ve been digging all day and I’ll be doing same tomorrow. But I’ve never had so many fun. As an archaeology student, I have already knew something about the Qin Tomb. Most Chinese child can tell you Qin Shihuang first joined China together. He was a brilliant ruler, and he was also a cruel man. When he became king, he immediate ordered workers to construct an underground tomb, which it is said to contain great treasures. But the actual entrance to the tomb has ever been found, nor has the tomb been opened. It’s said that if everyone steps across the entrance, the crossbows will fire.

 

1.tiring→tired 2.same前加the 3.many→much 4.knew→known 5.child→children 6.and→but 7.immediate→immediately 8.去掉it 9.ever→never 10.everyone→anyone 【解析】 【试题分析】 1.tiring→tired,考察形容词,tiring形容物,tired形容人,而“I”是人,故tiring→tired. 2.same前加the,考察固定搭配,same前一定要有the,故same 前加the. 3.many→much,考察不可数名词,fun是不可数名词,用much修饰,故many→much. 4.knew→known,考察动词的现在分词,句意:我己经知道了有关秦岭墓的一些东西,此句中have表现在完成时,所以动词know要用现在分词,而不是过去时,故knew→known. 5.child→children考察名词,most大多数,后边名词要用复数,故child→childrn. 6.and→but,考察连词, 句意:他是一个杰出的统治者,但是也是一个残暴的人。此处表转折,故and→but. 7.immediate→immediately,考察副词,句意:当他成为君王,他马上命令工人们修筑地下陵墓,据说这个陵墓藏着很多宝贝。ordered是动词,修饰动词要用副词,故immediate→immediately. 8.去掉it,考察定语从句,句意:参考上一题。此句中which指代了前边那句话,故去掉it. 9.ever→never,句意:但是这个通往陵墓的出口从没被找到过,陵墓也没被打开过。故ever→never. 【小题10 】everyone→anyone.句意:如果有人跨过出口,石弩就会着火,这里要表达的意思是有人,而不是每个人,故everyone→anyone. 考点:短文改错。
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My husband and I were paying a visit  1.  my parents in Tucson. We went to a fast-food restaurant for dinner together. My husband went to the counter 2.   (order )dishes and I stood with my parents.

My dad is 90 3.  (year) old. He can hardly see very well and walks with a stick. I was scanning the restaurant, 4. (wait) to sit at the first table that was  more convenient than others. A woman who was 5.  (sit) with her son made eye contact with me and asked me to come to her. With a  puzzled look on my face, I pointed to ___6.   (me) and said , “Me ?” She  nodded and said , Yes, you.” I walked to the table and she said , Bring your family here. I can finish eating at the counter. My son is in   7.  hurry to leave anyway.” My eyes   8.  (fill)with tears as she wiped down the table and guided my dad to the seat.

I always believe that there are   9.  (nature) kind people in this world. This woman has set a good example to her son,   10.  is a really lucky guy.

 

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One day I went to a store to get some needed items for my family. I gathered up my goodies and headed for the ________ counter, only to be ________ in the narrow aisle (通道) by a young man who ________ to be about sixteen years old. I wasn’t in a hurry, so I ________ waited for the boy to realize that I was there. It was obvious now, he was mentally ________ and a little shocked as he turned and saw me standing so ________ to him, waiting to ________. I said, “Hey Buddy, what’s your name?”

“My name is Denny and I’m ________ with my Mommy,” he responded proudly.

“Wow,” I said, “that’s a(n) ________ name; I wish my name was Denny, but my name is Steve. How old are you Denny?”

“How old am I now, Mommy?” he asked his mother as she slowly ________ from the next aisle. “You’re fifteen years old, Denny”. Then he headed toward the toy section.

Denny’s mom ________ me for taking the time to talk with her son. She told me that most people wouldn’t ________ look at him, much less talk to him.

I told her that it was my ________ and that there are plenty of red, yellow, and pink roses in God’s Garden; ________, “Blue Roses” are very ________ and should be appreciated ________ their beauty and distinctiveness.

You see, Denny is a Blue Rose and ________ someone doesn’t stop and ________ that rose with their heart and touch that rose with their kindness, then they’ve ________ a blessing from God. So, the next time you see a BLUE ROSE, don’t turn your head and walk off. ________ to smile and say Hello.

1.A. customerB. checkoutC. salesmanD. office

2.A. blockedB. troubledC. metD. found

3.A. pretendedB. appearedC. declaredD. tended

4.A. slowlyB. slightlyC. kindlyD. patiently

5.A. tornB. brokenC. challengedD. wounded

6.A. closeB. friendlyC. nextD. happily

7.A. steal awayB. hurry outC. squeeze byD. break in

8.A. swimmingB. shoppingC. singingD. travelling

9.A. coolB. badC. ordinaryD. old

10.A. went awayB. walked byC. came overD. turned up

11.A. thankedB. stared atC. praisedD. chatted with

12.A. everB. stillC. yetD. even

13.A. courageB. pleasureC. habitD. faith

14.A. thereforeB. besidesC. meanwhileD. however

15.A. rareB. bigC. brightD. colorful

16.A. withB. byC. forD. in

17.A. unlessB. ifC. beforeD. after

18.A. smellB. pickC. buyD. see

19.A. wantedB. forgottenC. missed D. invited

20.A. Be braveB. Be proudC. Take it easyD. Take the time

 

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The Science of Risk-Seeking

Sometimes we decide that a little unnecessary danger is worth it because when we weigh the risk and the reward, the risk seems worth taking.   1. Some of us enjoy activities that would surprise and scare the rest of us. Why? Experts say it may have to do with how our brains work.

The reason why any of us take any risks at all might have to do with early humans. Risk-takers were better at hunting, fighting, or exploring. 2. As the quality of risk-taking was passed from one generation to the next, humans ended up with a sense of adventure and a tolerance for risk.

So why aren’t we all jumping out of airplanes then? Well, even 200, 000 years ago, too much risk-taking could get one killed. A few daring survived, though, along with a few stay-in-the-cave types. As a result, humans developed a range of character types that still exists today. So maybe you love car racing, or maybe you hate it. 3.

No matter where you are on the risk-seeking range, scientists say that your willingness to take risks increases during your teenage years. 4. To help you do that, your brain increases your hunger for new experiences. New experiences often mean taking some risks, so your brain raises your tolerance for risk as well.

___5.   For the risk-seekers, a part of the brain related to pleasure becomes active, while for the rest of us, a part of the brain related to fear becomes active.

As experts continue to study the science of risk-seeking, we’ll continue to hit the mountains, the waves or the shallow end of the pool.

A. It all depends on your character

B. Those are the risks you should jump to take.

C. Being better at those things meant a greater chance of survival.

D. Thus, these well-equipped people survived because they were the fittest.

E. This is when you start to move away from your family and into the bigger world.

F. However, we are not all using the same reference standard to weigh risks and rewards.

G. New brain research suggests our brains work differently when we face a nervous situation.

 

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Stop wasting your time thinking of reasons for your failures and shortcomings.  Instead, realize that the seeds of success were planted within you when you were born. Only you have the power to make those seeds grow.

The seeds, and the power to grow them, are contained in the most awesome machine ever created: the human mind. Success is a choice and not a chance. You were born a winner. You were born rich. You can be a success if only you make the right choice.

You cannot be successful without first developing your self-esteem (自信心). Your level of self-esteem is always based on the degree of control that you are able to exercise over yourself, and thus over your life. People with low self-esteem are people who do not believe that they have any power,or responsibility for their lives. They are always victims. They are leaves tossed (摇摆) by the winds of chance blown about with any sudden change in the weather.

You can exercise control over your life only to the degree that you believe you are responsible for everything that happens in your life.  Failures think that everything happens by accident and chance. Successful people realize that they are responsible.

Everything happens as a result of something.  If we can identify the cause,we can control the effect. We are responsible for what we choose to think and believe. One generally rises to the level that one expects. We are responsible for setting our expectations. Our success is dependent upon our level of confidence.

If you associate with positive-thinking people,you are definitely going to achieve success. On the contrary,the opposite happens. We are responsible for finding,planting,and nurturing (培育) the seeds that contain future victory, born from setbacks (挫折).

In short, in all areas of your life,whether they are financial, physical, emotional, or spiritual, you are responsible. Once you recognize this, accept it, and firmly believe it. You are on the road to success.

1. Why people with low self-confidence are compared to leaves?

A. Because they can’t exercise control over themselves

B. Because they are easily affected by windy weather

C. Because they don’t have the power to face their fate 

D. Because they are ready to change their minds

2.What would losers think?

A. Success is the result of hard work

B. Working hard will lead to success

C. They fail only because of bad luck

D. They don’t make efforts to succeed

3. What can be inferred from the fifth paragraph?

A. Setting our expectations is essential before taking action

B. Knowing cause and effect is the key to future success

C. Thoughts and beliefs are the result of creative mind

D. Whether we will succeed depends on our attitudes

4. What does the last paragraph serve as?

A. The proof of the author’s points

B. The conclusion of the argument

C. An introduction to another topic

D. A comparison between two views

 

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“We are good mothers,” I said to my friend, as we sat on our comfortable beach chairs under our beach umbrella and watched our children playing in the waves.

Out of nowhere, the children took off running. About fifty yards from us, a man—maybe in his fifties—was fishing. The children stood next to him and watched with their little mouths hanging open as he cast the fishing lines. He smiled at them. They ran back to us—all except my three-year-old daughter, Drew.

My heart beat fast with horror. “Drew! Come here! Play with your friends!” I shouted, very aware that my speeches about not talking to strangers weren’t working. It seemed that many parents heard of horrible stories about children being taken away by strangers. Responsible mothers should teach their children that the world is a dangerous place. So I felt relieved when Drew ran towards me and took hold of a shovel (铲子). Then she looked me in the eye: “I want to be with the person.”

Again, she approached the middle-aged man, and started digging next to him.

Several seconds later, she returned, waving something shiny.

“Look, Mommy! A toy fish!”

It was, indeed, a toy fish—yellow and rubber. This must have been what he was using to attract the fish. And he’d given it to Drew. The three other children were deeply impressed, and they didn’t try to hide how jealous(妒忌的)they were—clearly, they all wanted the fish.

“My friend gave me that fish!” Drew shouted loudly. The sand in front of the umbrella turned into a preschool cage match with a yellow rubber fish flying through the air. I felt like I might cry myself.

Unexpectedly, there he was: the man, standing right next to us with three more rubber fish in hand. He handed them to each of the children. By their faces, you would have thought he was actually the really kind big brother.

“Thank you,” I said, realizing that there is good and kindness in strangers.

1. How did the author feel when Drew stood beside the man?

A. relieved     B. angry   C. concerned     D. calm

2. What does the author think good mothers should do?

A. be around their kids 

B. warn their kids of danger

C. teach their kids to behave well

D. devote themselves to helping their kids

3. When was the author at a loss(迷茫)?

A. Drew handed her the toy fish

B. The kids fought for the toy fish

C. The toy fish was covered with sand

D. The stranger appeared from nowhere

4. What would be the best title for the text?

A. Give a kid a fish

B. We are good mothers

C. The world is dangerous

D. Teach kids to be kind

 

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