Question

短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

Li Hua and Wang Hai are students of Senior One. They all work hard but have different learning methods. Li Hua listens to her teachers attentive and tries to catch everything the teachers say. She spends more time doing her homework. It is certain what she can go to bed earlier and always keeps energetic in the day.

However, Wang Hai had a different way of learning. He likes to stay up late at the night, so he often feels sleepy in class. As the result, he misses lots of key point and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework, that makes it difficult for him to concentrate what he is doing. I prefer Li Hua's learning method.

Answer

1.all→both

2.attentive→attentively

3.more→less

4.what→ that

5.had→ has

6.night前面的the去掉

7.As the result →As a result

8.point→ points

9.that→ which

10.what前加on

【解析】

1.考查形容词。all代表三个及三个以上，both代表两个，李华和王海是两个人，故all改为both。

2.考查动词。listen to是动词短语，修饰动词用副词，故attentive改为attentively。

3.more→ less 考查反义词。根据下一句It is certain that she can go to bed earlier and always keeps energetic in the day.（因此她可以早早睡觉，白天可以保持精力充沛），由此推断出她晚上做的作业比较少，故more改为less。

4.what→ that 考查主语从句。句意：因此她可以早早睡觉，白天可以保持精力充沛。it是形式主语，根据句意，连接词在从句中不作任何成分，没有意义，故what改为that。

5.考查时态。句意：王海有不同的学习方法。本文为一般现在时，故had改为has。

6.night前面的the去掉 考查固定短语。at night在晚上。句意：他喜欢熬夜。故去掉the。

7. →As a result 考查固定短语。句意：结果，他错过了许多重点并且晚上要做很多的作业。没有as the result这个短语，as a result意为“结果”。

8. 考查可数名词复数。句意：结果，他错过了许多重点并且晚上要做很多的作业。point是可数名词，而且前面有a lot of修饰，故改为points。

9.考查定语从句。有逗号隔开，说明是非限制性定语从句，不能用that，故that改为which。

10. 考查固定短语。concentrate on集中精力于；全神贯注于，故what前要加on。

考点：短文改错。