Question

短文改错

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hunter likes to go traveling in summer, but he had bad lucky this time. Last week he went to an old temple on a high mountain alone. On the way there it suddenly began to rain heavily, so he ran down the mountain quick. When he got to the foot of the mountain, he found that the wooden bridge was under of the water. He had to spend the rain night in a broken house. He was so cold that he could hardly fall sleep.

The next morning the rain stopped and the bridge was damaged. He thought the river was not deep, so he tried to swim. In the center of the river, the water nearly washed he away. Luckily, he was saved by two man, but he lost his bag. Then they gave him some foods and dry clothes.

Answer

1.lucky →luck

2.quick →quickly

3.under后面的of去掉

4.rain →rainy

5.sleep →asleep

6.and →but

7.swim后加it

8.he →him

9.man →men

10.foods →food

【解析】

试题分析：文章讲述了猎人在雨季旅游时遭遇暴雨，他只好在雨夜露宿野外，淌水过河的经历。

1.lucky →luck.考查名词。此处由形容词bad修饰，故后面用名词，指坏运气，故lucky改为luck。

2.quick →quickly.考查副词。此处修饰动词短语ran down用副词，指快速跑下山。故quick改为quickly。

3.under后面的of去掉.考查介词短语。under the water“在水下”，under是介词，不用of，故去掉of。

4.rain →rainy.考查形容词。此处修饰名词night用形容词，指雨夜，故rain改为rainy。

5.sleep →asleep.考查固定短语。fall asleep“入睡，睡着”，是固定短语，故sleep改为asleep。

6.and→ but.考查连词。此处指第二天早上雨停了但桥被毁坏了。前后句是转折关系，不用and用but，故and改为but。

7.后加it.考查宾语。此处指他努力要游过这条河。句中的swim是及物动词，后加宾语。故swim后加it。

8.he →him.考查宾语。用于动词wash后作宾语用宾格形式，指把他冲走。故he改为him。

9.man →men.考查名词复数。此处由two修饰，指两个人，名词要用复数。故man改为men。

10.foods →food.考查名词。food“食物”，是不可数名词，不用复数形式。故foods 改为food。

考点：考查人物故事类短文阅读。