Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号() 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

     2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Sandy is seventeen years old. And she is much busy. She never has enough time for that she wants to do. Like many other girls about her age, she spends hours on the telephone, talks to her friends. She often goes out on the weekends, and she looks after children for other families to get some money. But, of course, during the school years she herself has a lot homework to do. During the football season, Sandy is more busier than usual. She and other pretty girls are cheer leaders. They jump up and down together, cheering when the team have played well. When the team is not playing so well, the girls try their best encourage the players. The cheers are usually not long, but it takes a long time to practice shout them together.

Answer

1.much→very

2.that→what/all

3.talks→talking

4.去掉weekends前的the

5.But→And

6.在a lot后加of

7.去掉more

8.have→has

9.在encourage前加to

10.shout→shouting

【解析】

试题分析：本文介绍了一个17岁的女孩Sandy。

1.→very much不修饰形容词原形，故把much改为very。

2.→what/all that在宾语从句中不能充当成分，而且后面没有宾语，因此把that改成all或是what。

3.→talking 现在分词短语作状语，故把talks改为talking。

4.

5.→And 此处表并列而非转折。故把But改为And。

6.

7.

8.→has the team是单数，故把have改为has。

9.

10.→shouting 固定用法：practice doing sth.练习做某事，故把shout 改为shouting。

【名师点拨】

1. 动词不定式作宾语补足语

encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事；want sb. to do 想让某人做某事；invite sb. to do邀请某人做某事； ask sb. to do 请求某人做某事；order sb. to do命令某人做某事； tell sb. to do告诉某人做某事；force sb. to do 强迫某人做某事；allow sb. to do允许某人做某事； forbid sb. to do 禁止某人做某事；persuade sb. to do 劝说某人做某事。

2.不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语

have/make/see/watch/hear/let/notice/observe/feel/look at/listen to sb. do sth.

注意：help sb. (to) do sth.

温馨提示：不带to 的动词不定式作宾语补足语，但是变成被动语态时要把to加上。He made me feel at home. （主动语态）I was made to feel at home.（被动语态）

考点：考查短文改错