Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

   修改：在错的下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

   注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

         2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

During the holiday of National Day, I saw a heated crime action movie naming Operation Mekong，that was based on a true story known as the Mekong Massacre. Two Chinese commercial vessels were hijacked while traveling down the Mekong River of the Golden Triangle, one of the large drug-manufacturing region in the world. All 13 sailors killed, and 900,000 methamphetamine pills were found on the spot by Thailand officials. The Chinese government sent a group of admirable officers to the Golden Triangle so as to uncover a truth of the case. The police informer in Thailand concentrated all her attention on the usual clues. By updating clues constant, he assisted his colleagues to acquire thorough evidence of the crime. Eventually officers cracked the criminal organization and brought criminals to justice. All in all, I highly recommend this film to all of you, so it is eye-catching and thought-provoking, and I think it is worth to seeing.

Answer

1.naming→named

2.that→which

3.large→largest

4.region→regions

5.killed前面增加were

6.a→the

7.her→his

8.constant→constantly

9.so→because

10.去掉worth和seeing中间的to

【解析】

试题分析：国庆期间向人们推荐一部值得看的影片Operation Mekong。

1.naming→named 此处是过去分词作后置定语，故把naming→named。

2.that→which Operation Mekong做先行词，指物，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做主语，故把that→which。

3.large→largest 句意：世界上最大的药品生产区之一。根据句意可知用最高级，故把large→largest。

4.region→regions 句意：世界上最大的药品生产区之一。根据句意可知用名词复数，故把region→regions。

5.killed前面增加were 句意：所有13名水手被杀死。根据句意可知用一般过去时态的被动语态，故在killed前面增加were。

6.a→the 句意：为了揭开案件的真相。此处特指“案件的事实”，故把a→the。

7.her→his 根据下文的“主语he”，可知把her→his。

8.constant→constantly 副词修饰动词，故把constant→constantly。

9.so→because 句意：我强烈推荐这部电影给你们所有人，因为这是引人注目和发人深省，我认为这是值得一看。故把so→because。

10.去掉worth和seeing中间的to 固定词组：be worth doing sth.值得做某事，故去掉worth和seeing中间的to。

【知识拓展】

1.be worth doing sth.值得做某事；be well worth doing sth.非常值得做某事。

2. 1.though/although/while/in spite of/despite(尽管)不能和but在同一句中出现；because/as/since(因为)不能和so在同一句中出现；repeat不能和agian在同一句中出现；enter不能和in/into在同一句中出现；return不能和back在同一句中出现。

考点：考查短文改错