Question

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

Answer

1.visit – visited

2.but – so \ and

3.去掉to

4.comfortably – comfortable

5.were – was

6.for – with

7.taking – taken

8.dish – dishes

9.such 和great hotel中间加a

10.me – mine

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文，介绍了上个月去北京旅游时所住的the South Lake Hotel的具体情况。

1.visit – visited 考查时态。根据前半句My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week和时间状语last month可知本文叙述的是过去发生的事，本句要使用一般过去时，所以使用过去式visited。

2.but – so \ and 考查连词。句意：这家宾馆位于市中心，所以从宾馆乘坐公共交通很容易就可以去别的对方。上下文之间存在因果关系，所以使用so或and连接上下文。

3.去掉to 考查动词。本句中anywhere是一个副词，修饰动词go，所以介词to是多余的，介词的后面要接名词或者代词做宾语。

4.comfortably – comfortable 考查形容词。在英语中通常使用形容词做定语或者表语，副词做状语修饰形容词、副词或动词。所以本句中使用形容词comfortable修饰名词double-room。

5.were – was 考查主谓一致。当从句放在句首做主语的时候，谓语动词的单复数要根据表语的单复数确定。本句的表语是单数名词the free high-speed Internet connection，所以谓语动词也使用单数形式。

6.for – with 考查固定搭配。动词短语share sth with...与某人分享....；句意：我还和朋友分享了很多在北京拍摄的照片。所以要把for换成with。

7.taking – taken 考查非谓语动词。本句中动词take与photo构成被动关系，所以使用过去分词短语做定语。

8.dish – dishes 考查名词单复数。名词dish是可数名词，前面有several修饰，说明应该使用复数形式dishes。

9.such 和great hotel中间加a 考查不定冠词。本句中名词hotel是一个可数名词单数形式，使用不定冠词a表示泛指。

10.

【名师点睛】

短文改错口诀

名词数、动词形。

形副互混辩分明。

介词多用错与少，

连词转折与平行，

冠词错误常出现，

代词前后易错乱。

逻辑错误偶尔有，

认真阅读别遗漏。

考点：考查短文改错