Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

     增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

     删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

     修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her. However, I always can't help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears. Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual. The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.

Answer

1. wait后加for

2.middle-aged

3.had改成has

4. But 改成So

5.shoulders

6. by the train 去掉the

7.where改成which\that

8.running

9.gently

10. he 改为she

【解析】

试题分析：作者描述妈妈为他做的一些事情，感激妈妈为他所做的一切。

1. wait后加for 考查习语。Time and tide wait for no man。这是习语，时不我待。故此处要加for。

2.2】middle-aged 考查固定用法。此处是形容词，意为中年的，middle-aged。

3.3】had改成has 考查时态。此文用一般现在时来描述的，故将had改为has。

4.4】 But 改成So 考查连词。此处前后句 之间是因果关系，不是转折，故将But 改成So.

5.5】shoulders 考查名词单复数。人的肩膀有两个，要用复数，故改为shoulders。

6.6】 by the train 去掉the 考查冠词。By后接交通工具，中间不能加冠词，故去掉the。

7.7】where改成which\that 考查定语从句。此处为定语从句，缺少主语，故用关系代词，先行词为seat，故改为which。

8.8】running 考查动词。can’t help doing：禁不住做，故改为running。

9.9】gently 考查副词。此处为副词修饰动词，故改为gently。

10.0】 he 改为she 考查代词。此处指妈妈，是女性，故将he改为she。

【名师点睛】

短文改错口诀

名词数、动词形。

形副互混辩分明。

介词多用错与少，

连词转折与平行，

冠词错误常出现，

代词前后易错乱。

逻辑错误偶尔有，

认真阅读别遗漏。

考点：考查短文改错