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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10 处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。

One Monday afternoon, we were playing the basketball on the playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got injured but I had to be sent to hospital. He did not leave until an ambulance was arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my greatly relief, he brought textbooks to them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure have such a devoting friend.

 

1.去掉playing后面的the 2.while→when 3.Under→With 4.friend→friends 5.head→headed 6.but→and/so 7.greatly→great 8.them→me 9.pleasure后面加to 10.devoting→devoted 【解析】 1.去掉playing后面的the 考查冠词。表示从事某种球类运动前不加冠词,故去掉the。 2.while→when 考查连词。be doing when ...表示“正在做某事这时……”。 3.Under→With 考查介词。with the help of 在……帮助下。 4.friend→friends 考查名词。One of后面加名词的复数形式。 5.head→headed 考查动词的时态。整个文章用一般过去时来叙述。 6.but→and/so 考查连词。句意:结果我的右脚踝受伤并且我不得不被送到医院。不是转折关系,而是顺承关系,故改为and/so。 7.greatly→great 考查形容词。relief是名词,要用形容词修饰,故把greatly改为great。 8.them→me 考查代词。句意:使我感到安慰的是,他给我带来了课本并帮我辅导功课。bring sth to sb.给某人带来某物。 9.pleasure后面加to 考查非谓语动词。It's a pleasure to do sth. 做某事是一种乐趣。 10.devoting→devoted 考查形容词。devoted“献身的;忠诚的”,用来修饰人;这里表示一个忠心的朋友。 考点:考查语篇理解和语法知识
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B. a good image decides one’s status

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D. our real love to share with others

3.What does the underlined word “credit” in the last paragraph mean?

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4.In the writer’s opinion, selfie ________.

A. brings about people’s sense of confidence

B. is merely popular among teenagers

C. tells the true meaning of life

D. is an annoying phenomenon on the Internet

 

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B. To earn a lot of money from the project.

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D. To help solve the problem of lack of toilets in developing countries.

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A. It can be used over again.

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D. It should be buried in a pot after being used.

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