Question

文中共有10 处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符

号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，

并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Last weekend our school hold a sports meeting. Realizing it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much for our excitement, our performance was a success. My classmates took part in various event, such as running, high jump and long jump. Due to the hard training the athletes have done before, their performance was very impressively.

My classmates applauded and cheered for the athletes, some raising their cameras to capture the excited moments. The result was announced. Our class won the second place and our efforts were paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together proudly. This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of them as time goes by.

Answer

1.hold→held

2.a→an

3.whom→which

4.for→to

5.event→events

6.have→had

7.impressively→impressive

8.excited→exciting

9.paid前的was去掉

10.them→us

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者和同学们参加最后一次运动会的情况。全班同学经过努力拼搏，最终取得了好成绩，这给作者留下了深刻的印象。

1.hold→held 根据Last weekend可知，是发生在过去的事情，故用一般过去时。

2.2】a→an unforgettable首字母的发音是元音音素，故应用an。

3.3】whom→which 这里含有一个非限制性定语从句，先行词是ceremony，关系词应用which。

4.4】for→to to one’s excitement令人兴奋的是。

5.5】event→events event是可数名词，前面有various修饰，故event应用复数形式。

6.6】have→had 表示之前做的艰苦的训练，而且句中有before，所以应用过去完成时。故把have改为had。

7.7】impressively→impressive 用形容词作表语。

8.excited→exciting 表示“令人激动的”用exciting，excited表示“感到兴奋的”。

9.paid前的was去掉 主语是our efforts，所以不用被动。句意：我们的努力获得了回报。

10.→us 句意：随着时间的流逝，这场运动会对于所有我们都是一次宝贵的记忆。根据句意，故把them改为us。

【名师点拨】

不定冠词a 和an的用法。a用在以元音音素开头的词前，表示“一”；an用在以辅音音素开头的词前，表示“一”。比如小题1，university 这个词以辅音开头，所以前面加a，表示一所大学。an important meeting 一个重要的会议；an interesting story 一个有趣的故事；an old man 一位老人；an hour 一小时；an honest boy 一个诚实的男孩；an American lawyer一个美国的律师； a useful tool 一个有用的工具；a European friend一位欧洲的朋友。

考点：考查语篇理解和语法知识